Honest opinion wanted.

[carnee]

I would love to get some honest opinions from other writers about my story. I am in the middle of my second series Honeymoon In Hawaii, and would love to get some honest feedback.
My wife says she thinks they are good enough to publish, but I know they need a good editor. I tried to find someone before submitting my first story but couldn't find any takers. Would like to know what other published authors think. Is there potential here or should I just keep it to myself?

 

[SyleusSnow]

Hi carnee,

You might get more response by asking for opinions over in the Story Feedback section.

And including the URL of your story to make it easy for anyone who wants to take a look.

 

[carnee]

Thanks SyleusSnow. If any authors do want to take a look I would love the feedback.

Thanks again,
Carnee

https://literotica.com/s/honeymoon-in-hawaii