honest feedback, please

[praefect]

I read all your posts with great interest, and you've made good points. If I wanted support, I'd have asked for it. Thank you very much for your feedback. Your words are encouraging, and believable. I will take a look at that book, how to write a great novel.

 

[praefect]

Uh, sorry I lost interest right after the first question.

Tried jumping around and reading, to no avail, I couldn't keep my eyes focused on the monitor so I gave up the ghost and am now off to bed.

Sorry, you wanted honesty.

While the prose are laced with fancy words and such, nobody really talks like that, especially to themselves. KISS. Keep it simple (for) stupids. No I'm not calling you stupid, far from it. But, just to let you know, most readers here wouldn't have a clue what the big words mean.

Since I was very young people told me I talk funny. I do, actually, talk like that to myself. And sometimes with those close to me.

(edit: I blame being raised tri-lingual)

 

[SydneyBlake]

How to book

I read all your posts with great interest, and you've made good points. If I wanted support, I'd have asked for it. Thank you very much for your feedback. Your words are encouraging, and believable. I will take a look at that book, how to write a great novel.

How To Write a Damn Good Novel by James Frey, I think (not the one from the Oprah scandal).