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[lexium]

Hi, New Story

A guy befriends a woman who is being abused by her husband. One night the woman bangs on the guys door. She is completely naked. The guy steps out the door, just as the husband runs up behind the woman. The guy lands a right cross on the husband's jaw knocking him out cold.

The woman is finally had enough of her husband's treatment. She begs the guy to help her get even. The guy has a friend who is a gay bouncer at a biker bar. They take the husband to the bar and explains how the husband has been treating the wife.

The gay bouncer takes the husband to the back of the bar and ties him over a table. Gay bikers take turns fucking the husband in the ass while the wife take pictures.

 

[Guest]

Whose?

Are you writing it, or looking to someone else to do it?

 

[lexium]

I hope that someone else will write it. It seemed to be an interesting twist from the norm.

 

[Chicklet]

The problem I see with this story is that while it is an unusual topic (most stories don't involve m/m nonconsent) the violence of the idea might be too intense.

Anal rape seems to be difficult to accept at Lit, since it's usually pretty unhappy for the receiver. There's one M/M Nonconsent that I've read where the character is forced to blow the other man with a gun pointed at his head, but to me that seems to harsh.

M/M Nonconsent seems to scream for "blackmail" so that the victim is at least given the semblance of a choice...anal rape is just too hard for me to write.

Chicklet

 

[lexium]

The wife is the one getting satisfication as I see it. It is totally violent.

 

[BlackSnake]

I can see the point of this story. A guy beats up on his wife and now he is getting it in return. He forces his wife to have sex and now he is being forced to have sex.

 

[Guest]

I have a hunch that anal rape with such violence that this thread is talking about will show up on the Extreme link if/when Laurel updates the area.

 

[MissTaken]

Well, perhaps in order to give the abusive husband a choice, the blackmail could begin with a letter or note that says simply, "We reap what we sow."

Or something to that effect.

Then, it happens one more time...a black eye that the wife tries to hide and the rest of the story plays out as lexxxxxxx suggested.

While violent anal rape may not be popular, for many men and women, the idea of domestic violence is even more so taboo.

It might be worth a try.

 

[Chicklet]

I have a hunch that anal rape with such violence that this thread is talking about will show up on the Extreme link if/when Laurel updates the area.

i think so too

 

[lexium]

I don't like the giving of a second chance. No second chance for abusers. We can lighten up on the violence, but still fuck him until he likes it. Let him go play with boys if he can't treat a woman right. The first time is one time too many.

 

[lexium]

How about if the woman runs to her neighbor without any clothes. The neighbor lets her in. The woman tells the neighbor all about her husbands abuse and don't want to live her life as a battered wife. She wants to be with a man who loves and respects her.

The neighbor has been a good friend and has showed his interest in her more than a few times. The neighbor comforts her and they sleep together that night.

Early the next morning the neighbor has it in his mind to teach the husband a lesson. He contacts his gay biker friend. The neighbor tells his friend that the husband force fucks and beats the woman.

The gay biker goes to the husband's home and finds the husband still passed out from too much drinking. The biker beats and fucks the husband. The husband begins to like being fucked by the biker.

 

[Guest]

I don't like the giving of a second chance. No second chance for abusers.

So, do the husband's rapers, in turn, get raped themselves? And so on...

We can lighten up on the violence, but still fuck him until he likes it.

Fuck him until he likes it? Haven't many people expressed, over the years, that they do not like the "rape turned to pleasure" stories?

Let him go play with boys if he can't treat a woman right. The first time is one time too many.

I sense a lot of pain here. Seems this is more than *just* a story idea to you.

 

[lexium]

I think that women get more of the same when they give their abusers a second opportunity to abuse them. There is no changing that.

Who is it that don't like people finding pleasure in their pain. Finding something in it for themselves, especially when they are forced to endure it.

I rather the guy just feel the pain, but it was suggested that the story lighten up.

 

[Guest]

Who is it that don't like people finding pleasure in their pain. Finding something in it for themselves, especially when they are forced to endure it.

Since Lit started in '99 I have seen many people voice their opinions in both this board and Author's Hangout that they did not like stories where someone was being raped but then came to love the abuse and/or raper.

 

[Guest]

(Oops. Wrong thread.)

 

[lexium]

Since Lit started in '99 I have seen many people voice their opinions in both this board and Author's Hangout that they did not like stories where someone was being raped but then came to love the abuse and/or raper.

Tiggs! It took me a while to figure it out. How are you sweetie? It was something about the responses that seemed so familiar. Last time the name you were using was Puppi, right? Like a ghost you appear.

Well, this kind of story is hard for me to write, because I do believe that people who rape and beat women should get what they deserve. If I was going to write it, I would wait to see what the readers think. After all, they are the ones who opinion really matters.

You should checkout my artwork on the comic thread.

"BlessedBe" that has to do something with witchcraft, doesn't it?

 

[Guest]

Tiggs! It took me a while to figure it out. How are you sweetie?

"BlessedBe" that has to do something with witchcraft, doesn't it?

Hanging in there. I've been through a lot and things are getting better.

Yes, blessed be is a greeting Pagans, Neo Pagans, Wiccans, Witches, etc., say to one another.

 

[lexium]

Hanging in there. I've been through a lot and things are getting better.

Yes, blessed be is a greeting Pagans, Neo Pagans, Wiccans, Witches, etc., say to one another.

I don't know very much about it, but it's seemed interesting to me for a while. One of the ground are really into nature, right?

 

[Guest]

Tiggs! It took me a while to figure it out.

See http://www.literotica.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=118962

 

[horny_giraffe]

Sounds like a nice idea--I like the domination angle.

But I'd soften it by having the guy kind of like it, too. If the story is just pure revenge, it tends to lose it's sexual nature and just becomes unpleasant.

Some people like to write really unpleasant stories (sometime as a catharsis) but to be honest, I hate reading them. It's just icky.

If you want to twist it up, why not just have the guy be really homophobic? Then you can have the guy in tremendous turmoil--berating himself for being a "fag" because he secretly loves getting pumped in the ass (even if it hurts, it hurts good.)

In my experience masochism is just the flip of sadism, which could explain some of his abuses as being misguided kinky.

 

[lexium]

See http://www.literotica.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=118962

Play nice boys

 

[BlackSnake]

Women are design to be loved. Show the love.

 

[lexium]

 

[Chicklet]

I rather the guy just feel the pain, but it was suggested that the story lighten up.

yeah, I think the guy "just" feeling the pain is a little harsh. Better to seduce him into it and make him beg for it...humiliation over violence, okay?

 

[lexium]

yeah, I think the guy "just" feeling the pain is a little harsh. Better to seduce him into it and make him beg for it...humiliation over violence, okay?

Now don't forget that this guy is a wife beater. Going easy on the violence doesn't mean playing "Patty-cake" with him. Make him feel the pain and humiliation he made his wife feel, but resolve the situation where he would fine, besides getting his ass kicked, having a cock in his ass is what he really wants.