hi need some feedback new

[rlc32123]

hi guys i am new to this forum and would like to say hello also i have writen a how to guide but befor i put it on here i would like some advice if someone could read it for me and tell me wht they think, also i am waiting on a few websites to get back to me for permission to use some of there qoutes befor i will post it on here. any way let me know all the best
rob

ps
i can email a rough draft that isnt fully finished so you can get a good idea or should i put it in this thread?
thanks

 

[fuckmeat]

I'm sorry but if the spelling, punctuation and grammar in this post are anything to go by, nobody will put themselves through the torture of wading through whatever guide you've put together, not even a masochist like me.

And what exactly have you written a guide about? This isn't sexfaq where you can waste your life writing detailed walkthroughs. I would have a very hard time taking the advice of someone who patently can't put a legible sentence together. If you can write well and this is an example of epic laziness, I'm equally unimpressed. Even if you're dyslexic you can still make use of spelling and grammar checking software.

I'm sorry to be so negative, but I really think you're wasting your time. People post on HT with complex personal problems relating to relationships and sex. There is no such thing as an all encompassing FAQ for stuff like that.

 

[Lizzie_Borden]

Pretty much what fm said.

Alternatively, if your guide is for the "How To" section in the stories half of the site, take thee to the editor's forum.

 

[Eilan]

From what I can gather from the OP's other posts, he's working on a guide about squirting. I don't know that he can add to anything that's been covered in this thread.

 

[Cattypuss]

AAAAAAAAAAARGH!

Wall of incomprehensible text!

I found after five words that I'd rather be dead than read on!

Luckily I stopped reading before suicide became my only option.

 

[rlc32123]

lol no the guide does have proper punctuation and grammer i just wanted to know how i go about seeing if its worth going on the how to section as i have never done it before. also when typing for forums i usualy just type and cant be botherd to change spelling lol, but for things like guides and stories they have to be top notch, but thank you for the feedback guys it is appreciated.

 

[rlc32123]

AAAAAAAAAAARGH!

Wall of incomprehensible text!

I found after five words that I'd rather be dead than read on!

Luckily I stopped reading before suicide became my only option.

i am sorry i do have a blade here if you need it lol just kidding lol

 

[glynndah]

lol no the guide does have proper punctuation and grammer i just wanted to know how i go about seeing if its worth going on the how to section as i have never done it before. also when typing for forums i usualy just type and cant be botherd to change spelling lol, but for things like guides and stories they have to be top notch, but thank you for the feedback guys it is appreciated.

You may find this board has many authors and other intelligent individuals posting and has a high regard for proper spelling and grammar.

 

[SweetErika]

lol no the guide does have proper punctuation and grammer i just wanted to know how i go about seeing if its worth going on the how to section as i have never done it before.

Get yourself a good editor, then post the revised version in the Story Feedback Forum.

also when typing for forums i usualy just type and cant be botherd to change spelling lol, but for things like guides and stories they have to be top notch, but thank you for the feedback guys it is appreciated.

Then don't be surprised when many here can't be bothered to read your nonsense.