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Hi Everybody

I enjoyed the story very much. You're obviously an extremely accomplished writer, and the piece is great.

My criticism, however, and it is a minor one, is of the production of this story in audio form. I hate to say it, but I just didn't find your voice particularly erotic. I would have preferred it read by someone else.

I know that sounds like a vicious attack. Believe me, it isn't meant as one - it is just honest feedback. I have a pronounced stutter, and have suffered persecution for my voice all my life, so I feel dreadful being nasty about someone else's. However, I do feel that because of my situation I've learnt more about vocal projection than most people learn.

Essentially, all our voice are different. Not just in accent, language, dialect, etc, but in modulation - the way we make sounds. This includes pitch, variation of pitch, tone, and other, less obvious things. With practise, this can be altered slightly, but ultimately, no-one can fully change their voice.

I think you have a lovely voice - clear, pleasant to listen to, and much nicer than m-m-m-mine! However, I'm just not sure its "sexy."

Hope I haven't offended you.

Eros
 
Natural Born Eros said:
I enjoyed the story very much. You're obviously an extremely accomplished writer, and the piece is great.

My criticism, however, and it is a minor one, is of the production of this story in audio form. I hate to say it, but I just didn't find your voice particularly erotic. I would have preferred it read by someone else.

I know that sounds like a vicious attack. Believe me, it isn't meant as one - it is just honest feedback. I have a pronounced stutter, and have suffered persecution for my voice all my life, so I feel dreadful being nasty about someone else's. However, I do feel that because of my situation I've learnt more about vocal projection than most people learn.

Essentially, all our voice are different. Not just in accent, language, dialect, etc, but in modulation - the way we make sounds. This includes pitch, variation of pitch, tone, and other, less obvious things. With practise, this can be altered slightly, but ultimately, no-one can fully change their voice.

I think you have a lovely voice - clear, pleasant to listen to, and much nicer than m-m-m-mine! However, I'm just not sure its "sexy."

Hope I haven't offended you.

Eros
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Thank you for your comment! I am not offended at all. I intentionally used a very perky voice to make the piece chipper and fun. In some of my other recordings, I use a more sultry voice which, to some, might be more sexy. Thanks again, Eros.

Karen
 
No. I'm not gonna.

Coz' I've seen your pretty self naked with a dog in the amateur Picture Feedback forum.

Beastality is wrong (save the whales!).
 
ChilledVodka said:
No. I'm not gonna.

Coz' I've seen your pretty self naked with a dog in the amateur Picture Feedback forum.

Beastality is wrong (save the whales!).
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Hmmm. With dog,eh? Not me. Send a link, CV, send a link.

Karen Kraft
 
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