Hi all

[echoes_s]

Hows things going? Been hanging in here, still kicking, not doing much writing lately. Everyonce in a while inspiration pushes it way through in a flash then is gone again like tonight.

here are a few things I have written periodically, didn't seem fair to pop in once and again and say something then leave.

lol...uh, so what am I doing right now huh?

Breath

air swirled
a downy gasp
sharp ricochet
in morning mist
over the lake
where loons call
echoing silence

swoon just before
full sunrise
dusk obscured white
a mating call
a yearning

a wondering
if the next
breath will be
as momentary as this
and eyes open

a fluttered wisp
of lash
wings slapping still water
the sun yawns bright
taking a second breath.


awakening

the wind prattled whispers,
tattling leaves in raindrops
"here comes another frisky breeze,"
a shimmered skitter
with flurried tease.

Then soft sun,
warm, etched, relieved,
baby kisses upon cheeks,
innocence with blossom,
Mother Nature nurtured peace

Chimes tinkle-tinged
chirped merry with
fluttered wing-beats
Spring danced with shadows
gently in my dreams




shudder-breath[//]

where is she
through waged wars
battlefields torn
mayhem asunder
silent thunder
rolled
hesitated
then raged
lightening struck blind

where is she
falls in silence
pain filled tears
wretching screams
of voiceless reason
yet she still cries
with nothing to say,
falls to her knees
and shudder-breathes


Fathers day

your eyes, blue ice,
freeze heart beats of yearning.
Voice of steel,
cold, unyeilding.
Daughter to father,
'a son' you couldn't reach...
it's been seven years now,
again I ponder time.
The phone stares silent,
you, your histronic, bottled rage,
me, my choice of freedom
and peace of mind.

 

[WickedEve]

didn't seem fair to pop in once and again and say something then leave.

lol...uh, so what am I doing right now huh?

Would you feel better if we ignored you? We can do that.

 

[WickedEve]

Breath

air swirled
a downy gasp
sharp ricochet like these two lines!
in morning mist
over the lake
where loons call
echoing silence

swoon just before
full sunrise
dusk obscured white Ohhh, another really good one.
a mating call
a yearning

a wondering
if the next
breath will be
as momentary as this
and eyes open

a fluttered wisp
of lash
wings slapping still water
the sun yawns bright
taking a second breath.

Good poem. A few of those lines really good.

 

[bluerains]

loons are a weakness

Hows things going? Been hanging in here, still kicking, not doing much writing lately. Everyonce in a while inspiration pushes it way through in a flash then is gone again like tonight.

here are a few things I have written periodically, didn't seem fair to pop in once and again and say something then leave.

lol...uh, so what am I doing right now huh?

Breath

air swirled
a downy gasp
sharp ricochet
in morning mist
over the lake
where loons call
echoing silence

swoon just before
full sunrise
dusk obscured white
a mating call
a yearning

a wondering
if the next
breath will be
as momentary as this
and eyes open

a fluttered wisp
of lash
wings slapping still water
the sun yawns bright
taking a second breath.


awakening

the wind prattled whispers,
tattling leaves in raindrops
"here comes another frisky breeze,"
a shimmered skitter
with flurried tease.

Then soft sun,
warm, etched, relieved,
baby kisses upon cheeks,
innocence with blossom,
Mother Nature nurtured peace

Chimes tinkle-tinged
chirped merry with
fluttered wing-beats
Spring danced with shadows
gently in my dreams




shudder-breath[//]

where is she
through waged wars
battlefields torn
mayhem asunder
silent thunder
rolled
hesitated
then raged
lightening struck blind

where is she
falls in silence
pain filled tears
wretching screams
of voiceless reason
yet she still cries
with nothing to say,
falls to her knees
and shudder-breathes


Fathers day

your eyes, blue ice,
freeze heart beats of yearning.
Voice of steel,
cold, unyeilding.
Daughter to father,
'a son' you couldn't reach...
it's been seven years now,
again I ponder time.
The phone stares silent,
you, your histronic, bottled rage,
me, my choice of freedom
and peace of mind.

as are your words..you have not forgotten your beauty...nice to see your pen...smiles/blue

 

[echoes_s]

Would you feel better if we ignored you? We can do that.

ok, who gets to spank who here?

 

[echoes_s]

as are your words..you have not forgotten your beauty...nice to see your pen...smiles/blue

Hi blue, thanks, good to see your smiling heart still sharing inspiration and glowing radiant with scented blossoms of lilacs and deep green grass

 

[The_Fool]

ok, who gets to spank who here?

I get to spank you......*smoooooooooooch*

I only spank eve when she asks nicely.....

 

[WickedEve]

I get to spank you......*smoooooooooooch*

I only spank eve when she asks nicely.....

I thought it was when I didn't ask nicely.

the wind prattled whispers,
tattling leaves in raindrops
"here comes another breeze,"
a shimmered skitter
with flurried tease.
Drop frisky and this is great. Or replace frisky. Or ignore me. lol

 

[echoes_s]

I get to spank you......*smoooooooooooch*

I only spank eve when she asks nicely.....

Fool! miss you much! brick burns all gone now?

Eve asks you nicely?

I always thought it was the other way around

 

[Rybka]

I Like Your Stuff!!

I'd say something more, but I'd only get it wrong and piss you off.

Hows things going? Been hanging in here, still kicking, not doing much writing lately. Everyonce in a while inspiration pushes it way through in a flash then is gone again like tonight.

here are a few things I have written periodically, didn't seem fair to pop in once and again and say something then leave.

lol...uh, so what am I doing right now huh?

Breath

air swirled
a downy gasp
sharp ricochet
in morning mist
over the lake
where loons call
echoing silence

swoon just before
full sunrise
dusk obscured white
a mating call
a yearning

a wondering
if the next
breath will be
as momentary as this
and eyes open

a fluttered wisp
of lash
wings slapping still water
the sun yawns bright
taking a second breath.


awakening

the wind prattled whispers,
tattling leaves in raindrops
"here comes another frisky breeze,"
a shimmered skitter
with flurried tease.

Then soft sun,
warm, etched, relieved,
baby kisses upon cheeks,
innocence with blossom,
Mother Nature nurtured peace

Chimes tinkle-tinged
chirped merry with
fluttered wing-beats
Spring danced with shadows
gently in my dreams




shudder-breath[//]

where is she
through waged wars
battlefields torn
mayhem asunder
silent thunder
rolled
hesitated
then raged
lightening struck blind

where is she
falls in silence
pain filled tears
wretching screams
of voiceless reason
yet she still cries
with nothing to say,
falls to her knees
and shudder-breathes


Fathers day

your eyes, blue ice,
freeze heart beats of yearning.
Voice of steel,
cold, unyeilding.
Daughter to father,
'a son' you couldn't reach...
it's been seven years now,
again I ponder time.
The phone stares silent,
you, your histronic, bottled rage,
me, my choice of freedom
and peace of mind.

 

[Liar]

Got nothing clever to say. Just hi echoes, good to see you.

What's wrong with popping in once in a while? I do that several times/day.

 

[echoes_s]

I thought it was when I didn't ask nicely.

the wind prattled whispers,
tattling leaves in raindrops
"here comes another breeze,"
a shimmered skitter
with flurried tease.
Drop frisky and this is great. Or replace frisky. Or ignore me. lol

yeah, thats it, thanks Eve, was something about this poem I didnt like, it was too.... skippy

sounding better now

 

[BooMerengue]

*wavin...

Hi Echoes! So nice to see you back, sweety!

 

[echoes_s]

I'd say something more, but I'd only get it wrong and piss you off.

Rybka, I don't get pissed off much and any constructive help is muchly appreciated. Didn't you know I always looked up to you...seriously?
I really noticed when you left...hmmm, now I wonder if we ever spoke and there was a misunderstanding left open. I don't think I have gotten pissed on this board although I did get upset when there was a huge dispute over a poem and friends were getting flamed. I do talk back though, but more like questioning.

 

[echoes_s]

Got nothing clever to say. Just hi echoes, good to see you.

What's wrong with popping in once in a while? I do that several times/day.

Hi Liar! Missed you too

 

[WickedEve]

Rybka, I don't get pissed off much and any constructive help is muchly appreciated. Didn't you know I always looked up to you...seriously?
I really noticed when you left...hmmm, now I wonder if we ever spoke and there was a misunderstanding left open. I don't think I have gotten pissed on this board although I did get upset when there was a huge dispute over a poem and friends were getting flamed. I do talk back though, but more like questioning.

Fish is upset because of another thread. But if he goes back to that thread, he'll find that the poster left a comment.

 

[echoes_s]

*wavin...

Hi Echoes! So nice to see you back, sweety!

Hey Boo, missed you too, thought of you lots. Hows things going? Thanks for the email, yes I got it and sorry I didnt send one back, I haven't even been answering emails...bad bad me girl. (Had you needed help or anything of course I would have answered)

 

[echoes_s]

Fish is upset because of another thread. But if he goes back to that thread, he'll find that the poster left a comment.

Yes I read that post and Fish was nothing but kind yet honest and very informative, helpful and I saw her/his post too saying they posted in wrong spot...Fish come back plse...

 

[Guest]

Don't have time to read the whole thread but just wanted to pop in and give echoes a smooch on the cheek. Heck! Both cheeks.



Good to see you!

 

[BooMerengue]

Hey Boo, missed you too, thought of you lots. Hows things going? Thanks for the email, yes I got it and sorry I didnt send one back, I haven't even been answering emails...bad bad me girl. (Had you needed help or anything of course I would have answered)

Everything's all right, baby! No worries! But I am going to disappear from here for awhile, I think. Tell you what- you hold the fort til I get back, ok? You can do it. Just throw some kisses around, and don't piss off anyone more than once a month. Oh, yeah... write some poems, too. I've quit, but you can do it! And much better, too!!

 

[echoes_s]

Don't have time to read the whole thread but just wanted to pop in and give echoes a smooch on the cheek. Heck! Both cheeks.



Good to see you!

Hi Tess! If you smooch, I might smooch back, nibbles definately would be naughtier

nooo, not awake yet

Good to see you too, missed you.

 

[echoes_s]

Everything's all right, baby! No worries! But I am going to disappear from here for awhile, I think. Tell you what- you hold the fort til I get back, ok? You can do it. Just throw some kisses around, and don't piss off anyone more than once a month. Oh, yeah... write some poems, too. I've quit, but you can do it! And much better, too!!

uh write some poems

you mean I have to go up there and clean up the massive dusty chamber with cobwebs, burnt old wax, geez, replace with new candles and find my favorite chair again, even sort and reorganize music and write poems?
Great, I come back and you leave...now how is that going to look on my stalkers resume?

I stalked her for 3 years but she left?

lol have to take kids into town today...which means I need to wake up
dont be gone too long please.

 

[BooMerengue]

I'm waiting for a poem...

<<--- my new look- eyes hidden from the world

 

[annaswirls]

Got nothing clever to say. Just hi echoes, good to see you.

What's wrong with popping in once in a while? I do that several times/day.

Gosh I don't have anything clever to say, either, but it is sure nice to have you back! Stick around, the passion thread is not the same without you!

thanks for the sweet poem you posted to me, made me blush! and a little squirm too

~AS

 

[Guest]

echoes, good to see you around. i'm with liar, you need to drop your lines more often in the forum