Hi All!!!

dr_mabeuse

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Hi All!!!
I'm new to this site and I just wanted to say how great I think it is!:)-D) The poetry here is all just great!!! :)-D) I'm not 2 good yet, but I know I'll improve so that I can post more gr8 poems 2! ;-)
Meanwhile I wanted to take a chance and post 1 of pomes here 2 c what you all think of it. I'd luv to hear what you all think, but pleeze don't b 2 cruel cause this is my 1st time! I guess u could say i'm a poetry virgin ;-p:

The Loneliness of Love

Lonely...
In the infinitude of loneliness
is being alone
so really alone
And no one knows
the blue-
ness of my tears
That I cry
because I'm so utterly alone
Here
In the ultimate misty loneliness
Of
my infinite lonelitude


Well, what do you think? I think it might need some polishing. I've got about a thousand more I'll be posting here, tho. Poetry just seems so EZ once you get the hang of it!

Well, bu 4 now. Luv 'n' Hugs to all!!!!

---dr.M.
 
The Loneliness of Love

Lonely...
in the infinitude of loneliness
is being alone
so really alone
and no one knows
the blue-
ness of my tears
that I cry
because I'm so utterly alone
here
in the ultimate misty loneliness
of
my infinite lonelitude (no such word BTW)


ok now whats your point it is not very clear.......repetitive themes arn't poetry.....and this would get thrown off the stage in Chicago







dr_mabeuse said:
Hi All!!!
I'm new to this site and I just wanted to say how great I think it is!:)-D) The poetry here is all just great!!! :)-D) I'm not 2 good yet, but I know I'll improve so that I can post more gr8 poems 2! ;-)
Meanwhile I wanted to take a chance and post 1 of pomes here 2 c what you all think of it. I'd luv to hear what you all think, but pleeze don't b 2 cruel cause this is my 1st time! I guess u could say i'm a poetry virgin ;-p:

The Loneliness of Love

Lonely...
In the infinitude of loneliness
is being alone
so really alone
And no one knows
the blue-
ness of my tears
That I cry
because I'm so utterly alone
Here
In the ultimate misty loneliness
Of
my infinite lonelitude


Well, what do you think? I think it might need some polishing. I've got about a thousand more I'll be posting here, tho. Poetry just seems so EZ once you get the hang of it!

Well, bu 4 now. Luv 'n' Hugs to all!!!!

---dr.M.
 
Now to the heart of the poem, If you are lonely Dr, and want friendship
make yourself friendly
We that regularly participate in this forum enjoy comment debate critique, and do care about our work...........not every one at lit does. But we would prefer a little lubricant before you so quickly put all of us here in the same lot as the people who dont participate in this forum.............. perhaps reading this forum front to back would give you insight as to who the forum regulars are and you would refrain form putin all the poetry in lit in one category. Some of us here work very hard to produce art. Some of us have improved greatly throught the kind comments and patient instruction of others here. It was very insulting to say what you did to the regulars that participate here! The results should speak for themselves.....perhaps you should consider starting over....getting to know some of us first before you classify us and put us in that little box. There are several threads to participate in.........and i imagine your poetic skills could be quite challenged by some of us in here.

Regards_Land
 
Land, you're hoggin' the good Doctor all to yourself!

Doc, I have this twinge right here... no, here. It hurts whenever I sit down. If I take the butt plug out, the pain stops. But when I shove it back up my ass and sit down, it hurts again. What should I do? Can you give me a shot of something? I'm scared of shots, so promise me that it'll only be a little prick. Okay?
 
Uh oh

you in ze trouble now dottore. you done caught wicked's eye.
 
Re: Uh oh

Angeline said:
you in ze trouble now dottore. you done caught wicked's eye.
He caught the left one. The right one has a droopy lid. The left one will put a spell on you!
 
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