dr_mabeuse
seduce the mind
- Joined
- Oct 10, 2002
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Hi All!!!
I'm new to this site and I just wanted to say how great I think it is!
-D) The poetry here is all just great!!!
-D) I'm not 2 good yet, but I know I'll improve so that I can post more gr8 poems 2! ;-)
Meanwhile I wanted to take a chance and post 1 of pomes here 2 c what you all think of it. I'd luv to hear what you all think, but pleeze don't b 2 cruel cause this is my 1st time! I guess u could say i'm a poetry virgin ;-p:
The Loneliness of Love
Lonely...
In the infinitude of loneliness
is being alone
so really alone
And no one knows
the blue-
ness of my tears
That I cry
because I'm so utterly alone
Here
In the ultimate misty loneliness
Of
my infinite lonelitude
Well, what do you think? I think it might need some polishing. I've got about a thousand more I'll be posting here, tho. Poetry just seems so EZ once you get the hang of it!
Well, bu 4 now. Luv 'n' Hugs to all!!!!
---dr.M.
I'm new to this site and I just wanted to say how great I think it is!
Meanwhile I wanted to take a chance and post 1 of pomes here 2 c what you all think of it. I'd luv to hear what you all think, but pleeze don't b 2 cruel cause this is my 1st time! I guess u could say i'm a poetry virgin ;-p:
The Loneliness of Love
Lonely...
In the infinitude of loneliness
is being alone
so really alone
And no one knows
the blue-
ness of my tears
That I cry
because I'm so utterly alone
Here
In the ultimate misty loneliness
Of
my infinite lonelitude
Well, what do you think? I think it might need some polishing. I've got about a thousand more I'll be posting here, tho. Poetry just seems so EZ once you get the hang of it!
Well, bu 4 now. Luv 'n' Hugs to all!!!!
---dr.M.