Hey Guys

[LillyRoses]

I just posted my first chapter of my Novella: Sabrina's Education. Would appreciate a read and ur feedback (masturbation, oral sex, women on women erotica..for this chapter anyway..there will also be bdsm, male sex, 3 somes in the chapters to come)

http://www.literotica.com/s/sabrinas-education-ch-01

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Boring. There's gotta be a name for this stuff, how about SOS, SAME OLD SHIT.

 

[lovecraft68]

I just posted my first chapter of my Novella: Sabrina's Education. Would appreciate a read and ur feedback (masturbation, oral sex, women on women erotica..for this chapter anyway..there will also be bdsm, male sex, 3 somes in the chapters to come)

http://www.literotica.com/s/sabrinas-education-ch-01

There is an actual feedback forum here and you would be better off posting this there. A lot of people will check it out and give you some comments about your story.

And they're usually more constructive than James.

 

[sr71plt]

A bonus is that James doesn't appear to read the Feedback forum.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

There is an actual feedback forum here and you would be better off posting this there. A lot of people will check it out and give you some comments about your story.

And they're usually more constructive than James.

I treat your stuff okay, dipstick. Youve morphed into STELLA.

 

[CeasarBoobage]

Browse over to http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=181349 to hype your story.

And yes, there are lots of people here love to post nothing but mean crap. You gotta have/develop a thick skin and ignore those jerks. They just get their jollies being rude online.

 

[lovecraft68]

I treat your stuff okay, dipstick. Youve morphed into STELLA.

You're not very constructive onsite James.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

You're not very constructive onsite James.

You mean I dont award T-Ball trophies for every crayon scribble. I thought that was your job here.

 

[sr71plt]

You mean I dont award T-Ball trophies for every crayon scribble. I thought that was your job here.

No, he means you have no balance whatsoever on the stories posted to Lit. (which I don't you ever actually read anyway). There's little but sourness in you at all that you display here. And in delivering your pronouncements on how others here write, you demonstrate no writing ability yourself--when you attempted to do that, you were caught at plagarizing the work of others. So, you lack any shred of credibility and exhibit no balance in your critiques.