Help!

[Natalya555]

I have completed my first story. Its an incest story about a "princess" who gets it. I would love it if someone was able to read through my story and make comments about it before i post it. I believe i am a great writer because i have loved writing my whole life. The problem is the only writing ive really done in past couple years is journal writing. In saying that i have a problem with run-on sentences because when i write in my journal i just plainly dont care lol. So if someone could get back to me that would be helpful. Also i have my boyfriend reviewing it as well! He really likes my perverted stories

thank a lot

xoxo Natalya

 

[LickYourNips]

PM it over to me and I'll edit it for you.... Remember there is a difference between being a great writer and just someone with good thoughts.

- Jake

 

[Natalya555]

im not sure how to do a pm on this site. i have been reading stories for a year or so before i decided to write one and become a member.

 

[Bigbobnc]

im not sure how to do a pm on this site. i have been reading stories for a year or so before i decided to write one and become a member.

What you need to do is click on the link near the top called 'User CP' and then click on 'Options' and there you can set whether you can receive PM's or not.

I'd love to read your story, especially the daddy daughter one

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

To be slightly more specific:
Go to User CP (top left of this page) then click on Edit Options (in the left hand column) and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Make sure that the next box down (Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators) is NOT ticked. Finally click Save Changes at the bottom of that page.

 

[LickYourNips]

What you need to do is click on the link near the top called 'User CP' and then click on 'Options' and there you can set whether you can receive PM's or not.

I'd love to read your story, especially the daddy daughter one

Ditto.

 

[Natalya555]

thanks i will get it to you shortly. There are some minor corrections i would still like to make myself. And also my story is going to be in two parts which i will specify when i send it to you! I will eventually get around to some corrections. And to be honest, my boyfriend is a gross as i am. And we have on going role plays that sometimes last for two days and this story was one of them(with some added detail of course)! i really hope you enjoy my story! i can use all the help i can.

xoxo Natalya