Help with writing oral sex.

[Cfnmlover84]

There's a scene in my story of a older woman giving a blowjob to a younger man, She hasn't been sexually active in 15 years but was considered a "sex goddess" when she was younger, What would be the best way to write this scene.

 

[Pleasuretiger]

She will have lots of good memories and very eager to do it. Probably with shaking hands and full of excitement. She would lick and taste it for awhile, enjoying the smooth pre cum. She may also wants to suck his balls, bringing back all her good memories.

 

[Jada59]

She will have lots of good memories and very eager to do it. Probably with shaking hands and full of excitement. She would lick and taste it for awhile, enjoying the smooth pre cum. She may also wants to suck his balls, bringing back all her good memories.

That sounds good. If it were me, I would start with my hands as well, holding his cock, kissing it all over, commenting on how hard he was. Then I would start at the head, taking my time and working my head all the way down and back up again. I would also pay attention to his balls and ass if he liked those things. Not all guys do. I would take my time and savor it. Make him squirm and and beg for me to make him cum.

 

[hulmule]

caressing the young mans face, telling him to relax. its been awhile but she remembers how to ride a bike

 

[25Amber619]

If I was an older woman who hasn’t been sexual for 15 years, there has to be underlying issues. Was she in an abusive relationship, was she a victim of a sexual crime? It sounds like this woman suffered at the hands of a husband, family member, father. I honestly feel before she gives this younger guy a blow job a certain level of trust must have been established. He would definitely need to reassure here and help restore her self esteem. It won’t be easy but to give your story credibility that needs to be established first. Just my opinion is all.

 

[LucianDevine]

As the above posts say, knowing why she hasn't been sexually active for 15 years is kind of important. Did her husband die and she just hasn't had anybody, was she raped and can't get past the trauma of it, etc.

Then there's the question of position. Are they side by side on a couch, is he sitting on the bed and she's kneeling beside it, giving her better access to his balls.

Tying whatever her past memories are into it would also be good, whether it's the reluctance because of the trauma, or licking her lips remembering the "good times".

Long story short, start with why the 15 year gap is there, and work your way forward.

 

[Cfnmlover84]

She hasn't been sexuality active because she had a bitter divorce that forced her to raise her child all by herself. She was also focused on her career in real estate.

 

[25Amber619]

A bitter divorce, raising her child, and focusing on her career are plausible. I would write this scenario as a young and upcoming real estate agent learning the trade from her. As he gets to know her he realizes she can teach him a lot more than just real estate. He begins to seduce her and gain her confidence. He sees the hurt in her eyes from the past surface more and more as their professional relationship develops. He also wants a more personal and sexual relationship to grow as well.

You have a good story line that if developed correctly can be a very steamy and sexual story. Good luck with it.

 

[LucianDevine]

Him seducing her is definitely the way to go. She likely hasn't felt desired in those past 15 years, questioning if she's still "got it". Having a young man slowly try to seduce her would help with her confidence, though I could still maybe see some fumbling fingers as she's working on his belt and the zipper. Hands shaking a touch with anticipation of what's to come, licking her lips when she sees it.

 

[Cfnmlover84]

This thread is actually a old one from when the story was still in early development. The story is now 98% done and awaiting some final polish.

Here's the story idea thread that's related to this. (warning: Light Sci-fi/Fantasy themes)
http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=1515783

 

[LucianDevine]

Hmm, the love potion actually kind of changes everything. Because it's sort of altering her state of mind, what with the relative kidnapping and sudden bondage. It's giving her the confidence that him seducing her was supposed to do. You can actually do something like hulmule said. With him bound and gagged, she can caress his face and try to soothe him in a maternal way before saying what they suggested. You could still maybe have her fumble with the belt and maybe the zipper. I could also definitely see something like Jada59 said, kissing it all over, commenting how hard he is, kissing and maybe sucking his balls. She could possibly comment about how swollen they seem and ask how long it's been but then say it doesn't matter and that she'll take care of it. Then I'd see her pouncing on his cock, maybe trying to take it as deep as she can, possibly gagging because it's been a while. She does remember how to ride that bike though, so she eventually manages to take all of it.