Help with true encounters

[4321freddy]

Hello,

So here’s the thing.

I’d like to share some hot encounters and experiences that I had with my ex wife.

Due to my kink our relationship went from monogamous to her sleeping with her ex and other men.

Problem is I’m not a writer, I just have these memories in my head that I’d like to share.

I’ve started writing them down but they are “clunky” for lack of a better description.

I need help and don’t know where to start.

 

[KeithD]

First thing, I think, would be to get a good lawyer on retainer.

 

[yukonnights]

KeithD makes a good point. I'm sure he's hinting at the need to truly fictionalize these true memories so there is no chance of anyone being outed.

Basically you're saying you can't write fiction. My only suggestion is for you to find an author you really like to read — then pay close attention to what they are doing; how they crafts a paragraph of narrative, the way they punctuate dialogue, how the story starts - builds - climaxes - and resolves.

What you seem to be asking for sounds like more than just an editor who looks over your final draft. Hopefully someone will come along who would like to co-write with you. I think it would be a good start if you got the memories down in a somewhat organized manner that you could share with someone who might be able to help.