help with story

[juanjsojr]

I'm new in writting storys here and I need help to see if I'm need changes in the story or adding more stuff if anyone is a editor can you help me

 

[TheEarl]

What kind of stories do you write Juan? Many authors tend to specialise in their subject area?

The Earl

 

[snooper]

I'm new in writting storys here and I need help to see if I'm need changes in the story or adding more stuff if anyone is a editor can you help me

Looking for an editor there is a standard answer:

Click here and pick the one, or ones, which best suit your needs. They are supposed to reply in 72 hours.

 

[juanjsojr]

re: gay story

What kind of stories do you write Juan? Many authors tend to specialise in their subject area?

The Earl

My first story is gay story

 

[juanjsojr]

Re: re: gay story

My first story is gay story

it's about father and son love

 

[jeanne_d_artois]

It sounds, from your posts, as if English is not your first language.

If so, use the link in snooper's post to find an Editor.

Best of luck.

Jeanne

 

[juanjsojr]

I find one they and she will looking at it and some others I speak spanish and english this is my first time writting a story

 

[dirtylover]

I find one they and she will looking at it and some others I speak spanish and english this is my first time writting a story

No offence (since I'm crap at writing), with that standard of English, grammar and spelling it would be very hard to read your story. Maybe you should consider writing in Spanish. Or maybe writing would be good practice.

 

[snooper]

No offence (since I'm crap at writing), with that standard of English, grammar and spelling it would be very hard to read your story. Maybe you should consider writing in Spanish. Or maybe writing would be good practice.

I think that was uncalled for. juanjsojr is clearly aware of his(her) shortcomings and asked for help!

 

[dirtylover]

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I think that was uncalled for. juanjsojr is clearly aware of his(her) shortcomings and asked for help!

Yes, it came out a lot worse than I meant. Sorry Juan. BTW, I'd like to learn Spanish - maybe we could help each other?

 

[juanjsojr]

that was not nice

that person was not nice man I just finsih my first story and I got help some people are mean like that person

 

[dirtylover]

re:

Hey, I said I was sorry! Feel bad now. I was trying to be honest, not nasty, but I was bit drunk. Just looked for your story, but it's not up yet. PM me it if you want...maybe I can make amends

 

[juanjsojr]

my story

my story came out great not many didn't like mines but they are more better emails then those who give a worst these people maybe do hate gay story or they have a problem with them but I don't care I'm starting on my second chapter already