help with new story needed

[coleman]

I am thinking of writting a father in law/ daughter in law story, but i need some idears for a possible plot. These are the discriptions of the two main characters.

Father in law- mid 50's, filthy/ugly man, crude and slightly arrogant, still married, lust for daughter in law.

Daughter in law- mid 20's, very attractive, loves her husband a lot, innocent and always faithful towards husband.

any idears??

 

[chatbug]

With those descriptions, it would have to be a nonconsent type of story.

The FIL either rapes or blackmails the DIL into sex. How does the son feel when he finds out that his father wants his wife?

 

[coleman]

I think this should be nonconsent as well, but i dont know how. This is what i have so far:

FIL has just got out of prison after a year for mabey assult.
Son and wife go to visit father to try to mend the relationship b/w father and son. DIL doesn't know FIL had been in prison, son never told her. Son is convinced father is a changed man and decides to stay for the weekend. FIL hasn't changed and starts to get urges towards his DIL.
This is where i am stuck. I don't know what happens next. Mabey the son is forced to go away leaving the wife with FIL. Please help

 

[BlackSnake]

I was thinking of a simple plot where, like everyone, the DIL makes a mistake and is caught by the FIL. Blackmail. The mistake would be something that she is convienced that her husband would not forgive her for.

The FIL, re-enforces the notions that his son would divorce her if he found out. She begs him not to tell, but he is at first unwilling to notgotiate with her. Desperate, she offers herself in exchange for his silence. She knows he wants her.

He agrees to sex, but after he wants more. The first time they are together, the FIL video tapes the scene for his amusement. He has her doing things she has never done before, with anyone.

When he approaches her again, she refuses. To her, she would rather take the chance that her husband would not believe his mean father over her. Then the FIL plays back the video tape of them together, and tells her that his son will believe what he sees.

She is trapped in a worse situation that she was before. She has no choice but to submit to her FIL's lust.

She begins to enjoy the things her FIL has her todo. But just when she starts to crave the erotic fantasies of the mad-man, her husband finds one of the many tapes that where made.

 

[Guest]

Are you still working on this story?

This is what i have so far:

FIL has just got out of prison after a year for mabey assult.
Son and wife go to visit father to try to mend the relationship b/w father and son. DIL doesn't know FIL had been in prison, son never told her. Son is convinced father is a changed man and decides to stay for the weekend. FIL hasn't changed and starts to get urges towards his DIL.

This is where i am stuck. I don't know what happens next. Mabey the son is forced to go away leaving the wife with FIL. Please help

Okay, so the daughter-in-law knows nothing about her father-in-law other than he and her husband had a "falling out" a while back. And, let's say it was even through her encouragement that the husband and her go for a visit. She doesn't know what the father did, but she feels no family ties should be severed, etc.

Reluctantly the husband agrees and they go for a short trip. Having come from a "normal", average middle classed family (where the extended family through the generations are close), the woman is litterally shocked and taken aback when she meets her father-in-law. Never in her life has she met a "Jerry Springer candidate" in person.

During the time they are there, the woman notices her father-in-law looking at her "funny". He's just shy of leering and is pretty forward with it. The woman feels uncomfortable, but she doesn't want to alarm her husband since it was her encouraging that brought them there. Also, since she doesn't know the man's background, she doesn't know she's in "danger".

So, they're getting close to the end of their trip. (Week, weekend, whatever...) Depending on how tame or entense you want this story, the father could lock his son up in the cellar, a closet, garage, shed, etc., and then go after the woman and rapes her...

Or, perhaps the father lives in the town where the guy grew up and some old high school buddies stopped by the house and after a while the guy agrees to go out with his friends for a quick drink...

Of course, I don't think that last one would be too realistic since the son does know what kind of man his father is. I don't think he'd leave his wife alone with the father willingly...

 

[Screaming Grace]

With those descriptions, it would have to be a nonconsent type of story.

The FIL either rapes or blackmails the DIL into sex. How does the son feel when he finds out that his father wants his wife?

wants to wach without FIL knowing and then blackmaling him.

Grace...

 

[Guest]

So, you're saying the son should watch his father rape his wife? He sits there and does nothing? And later he blackmails the father? Why would the father care? What would the son hold over him as blackmail?

 

[Screaming Grace]

So, you're saying the son should watch his father rape his wife? He sits there and does nothing? And later he blackmails the father? Why would the father care? What would the son hold over him as blackmail?

Not sure (long pause) How about the farter is very much a religious holy than thou family values kind of guy maybe he is a senator or something or the president of the USA.

 

[Guest]

If the father had a "holier than thou" attitude, he would not lust for his daughter-in-law and would not rape her.

 

[Screaming Grace]

Sorry I should have said he portrayed the persona o holier than thou attitude

PS you mised the typo 'farter' = father or may be he farts also

 

[Guest]

I didn't miss it. I just didn't comment.

 

[Screaming Grace]

I didn't miss it. I just didn't comment.

LOL

 

[seduced2cheat]

Father in law has friends

Hey there,

Okay, here's an idea.

The father was in jail so it's only natural that he would have connections that would be able to get the son out of the way for a night. In fact, he could even use this against his daughter, telling her of his past and that his son could get hurt if she doesn't do what he wants.

Depending on the way you play it, the husband could know or not know that his father had anything to do with it. In fact, if you wanted to add a cruel twist, you could even have the father act out a scene where he 'saves' his son from the men who kidnapped him, thus repairing his relationship with his son, but at the same time, having just taken his wife. It could end with the whole scenario bringing father and son together!

Thought I'd offer my two cents. Hope it stirs the juices.

seduced2cheat

 

[maggie2002]

We have agreed the father in law is a cad. The wife is an innocent and the son is only there because his wife thought they should repair the situation. Daddy;s twofriends from jail break in and tie up son and wife. Get daddy out of bed and tie him up along side wife. they threaten to kill everyone if wife doesnt have sex with them. Wife has always had fantasies of this happening and so is really not afraid it is her excuse to be the slut in her heart she thinks she is.

They tie dad to a table and untying wife they slobber all over her making her come against her will then place her on daddys hard thick large cock. Meanwhile they have undressed son who is not half the man daddy is. and the story goes on


Hope it helps

 

[Guest]

Casting Suggestions

If there's a chance the vignette is set in the early to mid 1970s, might I suggest Ernest Borgnine and Sissy Spacek ......

 

[Screaming Grace]

Re: Casting Suggestions

If there's a chance the vignette is set in the early to mid 1970s, might I suggest Ernest Borgnine and Sissy Spacek ......

Sissy Spacek wasn't she Carrie now I think she could have been treated a lot better.

Grace...

 

[Guest]

Give the lady a cigar

That was her although she was more recognized professionaly for being in Coal Miner's Daughter.....

 

[Screaming Grace]

Re: Give the lady a cigar

That was her although she was more recognized professionaly for being in Coal Miner's Daughter.....

And what am I supposed to do with a Cigar?

A question ML should have asked BC before she played with it.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

I think, getting the son out of the way is easy.

He could be a doctor or a fireman. Or the boss of a big company. Suddenly, his beeper/cell phone goes off: There is an emergency in the hospital or at his company. Or a fire alarm. (I think the company would be best).

The son believes that his father has changed, so leaving his wife together with his father is no problem for him. He tells them, that he will be back within 24 hours ....

Later, the wife enters the bath and takes a shower ... the FIL watches her through the keyhole. He noticed, that she didn't lock the door. When she is just finished, he opens the door and attacks the nude woman .....

Now, 2 additions for the rape itself. What about this: So far, the woman is not married yet, when she meets her future FIL. Since she is very innocent and religious, she is against sex before marriage - she is a virgin. (and I guess, her future husband is that, too). They wanted that their first time would be in their wedding night.
So now, the woman is not only raped, but also deflowered by the FIL.

And the other addition: The FIL loves anal. So he grabs her and forces her to bow down. Then he rapes her virgin, unprepared butthole. It sure hurts like hell - but her screaming just makes him hornier and hornier.
Finally, he cums into her butthole, and the woman is relieved, because her torture is over now. But as I said, the screaming made the FIL really horny. So he turns her around and rapes her (virgin ?) pussy, too. And of course, he tells her to keep quiet, otherwise, he would kill her.

And, like seduced2cheat said: He still has some connections. He hires a friend: The friend should "burglar" into his house. Then he should tie the FIL down to a chair and knock him out, and break some furniture.

When the son comes back from his trip, he finds his father tied to a chair, with a big wound on the forehead. And then he finds his wife, naked and raped.
It's obvious what has happened. Someone burgled into the house. He was surprised by the presence of his father, so his father and the burglar started to fight (that's why some of the furniture is damaged). Finally, the burglar knocked his father out and tied him to the chair .... and then, he raped his wife ....

The woman is still in a shock, so she refused to go to a hospital or to the police.
Still, the guy marries her. But after this brutal rape, the woman doesn't want any sex. However, even though, they had no sex, she notices that she is pregnant (but it's already to late for an abortion) .... and the only guy who ever fucked her was the rapist (her FIL) .....

 

[zorrro69]

I think that more interesting is blackmail. What if the old pervert bastrad tells a story (to the young and stupid wife) about his son in law - that he has a lover and promises to the wife to help her to catch her unfaithfull husband. And one day he gives her a hotel adress and the number of the room, where her husband commits his meetings. But when the young wife goes to a hotel room, she is been raped by two unknown men (they are friends of her fathers in law). And the balckmail begins - she can not tell her husband about the rape, because could not explain what she was doing at a hotel.