Help with a story

[shannon_est]

My name is Shannon, and I'm new to this site. I posted an introduction in another thread. I've just recently finished a story called "Sissy's Little Secret" which is being edited now, and I hope to post it soon. I left the story open for another chapter (or two) to be written later. In the next edition I want Sissy to seduce her dad (it was the youngest of 3 brothers she seduced in the first part.)

The problem I have is the time line, I've already established that it's the summer before her freshman year at college. I have in mind a Halloween story for her to seduce the older 2 brothers, but want the dad to be next. The idea I originally had was that it was winter and very cold and the power goes out at her dad's and she crawls in bed with him for warmth and things develop from there. My dilema is that it's not realistic for it to be that cold until late November or December. I'm pretty set on having her seduce her dad next, and the ol' leaving the bedroom door open while she's masturbating and he accidentally on purpose sees her is over done.

I would like suggestions of how to start the seduction. I want some reluctance on Dad's part. I try to make my stories seem realistic to a point.
Would appreciate any suggestions anyone would have.

Thanks,
Shannon

 

[Mikro]

Daddy's Girl

How about she goe's for a trip with dad to the mountains in a log cabin, that would bring winter closer or maybe the log cabin could be by a lake, she goe's swimming and get's cold, dad rub's her down with a towel, 'Like he did when she was young'

 

[Kettle Corn]

My name is Shannon, and I'm new to this site. I posted an introduction in another thread. I've just recently finished a story called "Sissy's Little Secret" which is being edited now, and I hope to post it soon. I left the story open for another chapter (or two) to be written later. In the next edition I want Sissy to seduce her dad (it was the youngest of 3 brothers she seduced in the first part.)

The problem I have is the time line, I've already established that it's the summer before her freshman year at college. I have in mind a Halloween story for her to seduce the older 2 brothers, but want the dad to be next. The idea I originally had was that it was winter and very cold and the power goes out at her dad's and she crawls in bed with him for warmth and things develop from there. My dilema is that it's not realistic for it to be that cold until late November or December. I'm pretty set on having her seduce her dad next, and the ol' leaving the bedroom door open while she's masturbating and he accidentally on purpose sees her is over done.

I would like suggestions of how to start the seduction. I want some reluctance on Dad's part. I try to make my stories seem realistic to a point.
Would appreciate any suggestions anyone would have.

Thanks,
Shannon

How about... the daughter finds her Dad masturbating in the shower, and while he isn't paying attention, his daughter comes in and "sees" him.

 

[shannon_est]

How about she goe's for a trip with dad to the mountains in a log cabin, that would bring winter closer or maybe the log cabin could be by a lake, she goe's swimming and get's cold, dad rub's her down with a towel, 'Like he did when she was young'

I like this idea, it could be done in a few different ways. My first thought was they go out on the lake in a boat, fishing... she falls in the water... and has to change in the make-shift boat house....... hmmmmmm the possibilities...

Thanks for your suggestion!
Shannon

 

[Cathleen]

If it is her first year in college you could play with the homesick emotion. There is also the professor crush, she is seeing mature men in a different environment now but she is still on that girl-to-woman line. She calls home a lot and maybe Dad will go visit a few times and she begins to see her Dad in that professor kind of way and the seduction begins. His reluctance might even turn to jealously in a way.

Welcome to Lit.

 

[cuteDanny21]

here is a thought, daddy likes to visit her in college, he drinks alot and hits on her friends. daughter is embarrassed takes dad away and fools around with him. they talk about it in the morning, she confesses her lover for daddy.
she is in college, lots of drinking goes on. i would know, i just graduated a few months ago.

 

[Nola]

How about this...Dad comes up to visit her at college for Parent's Weekend. He was unable to book a room at the local hotel so he has to stay with her in her very small dorm room. I envision it as her having a single rather than a roommate, but either could work. She watches him as he eyes her floormates traversing to and from the communal bathroom/shower...decides to use the close quarters to her advantage. Changing clothes...one bed...etc. Hmmmmmm. So many possibilities!

 

[Pyro Paul]

i would have to agree with the homesick emotion. she goes to her dads house during christmas vacation, havent seen his little girl ever since she grew so much(sexualy) she still acts childishly around him like she did when she was 9, (walk around the house half naked) but now since she is filled out, dear old dad cant resist.

if you want you could easly pull the whole christmas routine easly, she goes up to his room early on chirstmas day nearly knocks the door down to wake him up, singing its christmas chirstmas, runs down stairs wearing next to nothing wanting to open presents and stuff, and all he wants to do is open her. but again that sounds a bit over done here too.

 

[shannon_est]

Wow!

All I can say is WOW! lol Thanks everybody for your ideas. I guess I have lots to think about now. Damn that community college I went to, not like a real university with all the partying, now I feel like I missed out on something. lol Anyway, keep the ideas coming if ya want... I definitely feel the love here on this board.... or is it lust?

Shannon

 

[JRaven]

Do Canadiens celebrate Halloween?

My name is Shannon, and I'm new to this site.
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My dilema is that it's not realistic for it to be that cold until late November or December.
Thanks,
Shannon

I'm guessing it would be cold enough in Edmonton in late October for your story. You could always set it there.

(And my apologies to the Canadiens for my complete lack of knowledge.)

Jenny

 

[shannon_est]

I'm guessing it would be cold enough in Edmonton in late October for your story. You could always set it there.

(And my apologies to the Canadiens for my complete lack of knowledge.)

Jenny

Jenny, thanks for your suggestion. I was pondering the setting..... possibly in a more northern climate. I did live in So. Dakota for 5 years.... we had a layer of snow on the ground by late October that usually didn't melt til April. I'm still trying to get all my thoughts together for the story...... so we'll see what happens.

 

[JRaven]

Great! Good luck with it.

Sometimes sequels can be a pain. I've written one and wished that something that had happened in the first one didn't happen. It made something I wanted to happen in the second one all but impossible. Took about a week of real hard thunking to figure it all out.

Jenny

 

[Pyro Paul]

All I can say is WOW! lol Thanks everybody for your ideas. I guess I have lots to think about now. Damn that community college I went to, not like a real university with all the partying, now I feel like I missed out on something. lol Anyway, keep the ideas coming if ya want... I definitely feel the love here on this board.... or is it lust?

Shannon

id say more of lust. but we could love ya... you never know for certian untill you talk to us.

so i guess your gunna go for that, 'its cold out side, the ac broke and instead of freezing to death im gunna snuggle up with daddy tonight' which then turns hot angle? that would be belivable, but as said before it has to be in some of the northern states or in canda where snow starts in october. that or you can say dad lives all the way out in alaska, and hes all lonely out in the cold. same 'its cold' build up but then you can place the timing when ever you want.

 

[Pyro Paul]

Great! Good luck with it.

Sometimes sequels can be a pain. I've written one and wished that something that had happened in the first one didn't happen. It made something I wanted to happen in the second one all but impossible. Took about a week of real hard thunking to figure it all out.

Jenny

see thats why i put it in any ways, just to see if people are listining.

ya know like those online quiz's which have 100+ questions that are spaced out, and when your doing them like question 82 is like, did you notice that there wasnt a 14? and 83 is did you scroll back up to check if there was or wasnt one?

it leaves more of a taint on the mind making it easyer to remember.

 

[shannon_est]

Sometimes sequels can be a pain.

No kidding! lol I'm just finding that out. I put details in the first one I wish I hadn't now. Lesson learned.

so i guess your gunna go for that, 'its cold out side, the ac broke and instead of freezing to death im gunna snuggle up with daddy tonight' which then turns hot angle?

Still trying to figure out which angle I'm going to take on this. Maybe I just need to start writing, I figured after a couple of nights sleeping on it, the "lightbulb moment" would come, but it's eluding me this time. I guess it's time to take the bull by the horns ...

 

[creativeKaos]

So you need to make it cold in November or December..
Not so hard.... Actually, make it early November even: Simple excuse-- As the weather was just starting to change, nobody had turned the heat on yet, so it was chilly at night.

Or even in early December.. it can get pretty cold at night. Drawing from realistic experience, our furnace broke in the evening in December, and we couldn't get anybody to repair it until the next day. It was pretty chilly in the house... got down to about 40 degrees indoors.