Help! Where to Post?

[AsylumSeeker]

I have developed a terrible habit of not finishing my series, so I have imposed on myself a rule as of late that I will not post a series until it is finished. Not that I won't add to it, mind you.

Okay, so I have started a series that was (and is) essentially mind-control... or not, hence my question. Please allow me to explain.

In Ch. 1 an 18 y/o (of course!) female student has an affair with a brand new, fresh out of college female asistant coach. (Lesbian? Mature? Erotic couplings?) The coach is bi-sexual, in case this matters. Romors abound of the assistant coach having an affair, no other names surface, coach resigns under mysterious circumstances. So Ch. 1 is of this relationship.

Fast forward to Ch. 2, 18 y/o girl, now 19, is going to college away from home. A package arrives containing a laptop and a webcam and something else. She's of course curious, goes on the web. Messages begin to arrive. She's being blackmailed into having sex with random partners, goes along to save the honor of the coach she still loves. (I'm thinking Mind Control, will entertain other suggestions).

The 'coerced' sexual encounters continue with Ch. 3, butthe character finds she's enjoying them (still Mind Control?)

And in Ch. 4 more of the same (Mind Control?)

Ch. 5 is the end where all is revealed, I think it's a shocker, or not. (Would that stilll be Mind Control?) I could sprinkle in a last sex scene just to make it enticing.

Any ideas?

Thanks ya'll, in advance.

 

[3113]

duplicate post. Sorry.

 

[3113]

Non-Consent

Question: do you want all chapters of this story in the same category? Because...

In Ch. 1 an 18 y/o (of course!) female student has an affair with a brand new, fresh out of college female asistant coach. (Lesbian? Mature? Erotic couplings?)...

Lesbian. That tells the reader there will be two women. Anything else, and they'll go into it assume the relationship will be hetero--or at least that there will be a man as well as another woman, not just another woman.

Messages begin to arrive. She's being blackmailed into having sex with random partners, goes along to save the honor of the coach she still loves. (I'm thinking Mind Control, will entertain other suggestions).

Why mind control? Blackmail is not mind control. Mind control is hypnosis. You know "You're getting sleepy. Now you love me. Now you will have sex with me!" Person wakes up, not remembering what happened. What you've got is non-consent. She doesn't want to but has to.

The 'coerced' sexual encounters continue with Ch. 3, butthe character finds she's enjoying them (still Mind Control?)

Still Non-Consent.

I suggest you put the series in Non-Consent. Extend chapter 1 to include the blackmail note so that readers realize that the story's lesbian scene is just a teaser, and it will continue into hetero (etc.) Non-Con from this point on.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Thanks for the tips. Non-con it is.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Question: do you want all chapters of this story in the same category? Because...

Interesting. After further thought maybe I do post the first in the Lesbian cat, just to further emphasize the reason for the blackmail, about how wrong the story's antagonist thought it was. It will also act as a separating point, where the story moves from lesbian love to non-consent. Maybe those who read non-con and see Ch. 2 will want to know what casued this, then has to enter the Lesbian cat to find out the secret.

I'll probably lean that way before I simultaneously post the entire series, which is still in development. Plenty of time for others to chime in.