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[Arianne6947]

A young women going to culinary school in need of some extra cash for Christmas see's an ad for a job cooking Thanksgiving dinner for a frat house at a local university. Little does she know that this is a rather rowdy frat house.
She's in her early 20's 5'4" 115 lbs long dark hair and well proportioned body.
The young men find very attractive and begin to have naughty thoughts as she begins to prep the meal for the meal. Having visited the kitchen the day before she knew it needed cleaning before she could get to work and dresses in spandex shorts and crop top to do so. Her outfit is very reveling and makes the boys think of what she would look like naked. The boys talk about her and one of them decides to drug her so they can have some fun.
The next morning she wakes up tied to the frat house dinner table naked and sore with a large turkey leg stuffed in her vagina, but how and what happened

 

[JRaven]

Trying to get a handle on the story line...
I'm guessing with the turkey leg, she gets drugged after she's made the meal?
With salmonella and other nasty bugs, a raw leg could be almost as damaging as an STD.

Personally, I'd rather they chipped in some big bucks to talk her into getting naked while cleaning. She uses it to her advantage and assigns small tasks to guys by flirting with them. By dinner time, she's as horny as they are.

Just my thoughts,
Jenny

 

[monoblanco]

Hi there,
Sounds like a great start to a hot story with lots of potential.
I do agree with everything Raven said.
It sounds like you're going the route of non-consensual. If that's you're objective, you're well on your way. However, you did make a point that she needs the cash. I would recommend making it about that instead. Frat boys are rich, right? She needs the cash. That's how you get her out of those spandex shorts. Then you're off an running (ahem, fucking).
And the turkey leg? Not my thing, but... maybe something else in the kitchen with fewer kritters? A kitchen tool maybe? Something metal or glass that wont infect the poor girl.
Keep writing! I'll totally check it out when it's done.
Cheers.