Help w/ a MILF story

[somethingshappen]

It starts off w/ the neighborly hot mom. She hosts a pool party and feigns anger at the teens for their beach ball play. She ends up jumping in the pool grinding on each of the boys as she chases them around to get the ball. She then goes after a boy off to the side maybe after the party.

 

[Darkniciad]

It's pretty run of the mill. There are no real surprises except for which of the guys she's going to end up screwing, and the pool thing gets a lot of play in older woman stories. ( Pool boy, anyone? )

Personally, I'd probably come at it from the older woman's POV. I would absolutely tone her down. Get inside her head with the temptation of all that bare skin on hot young studs. Have her hesitate a little and doubt herself. Maybe let her overhear something that spurs her to push a little more. Or, perhaps she's already pushed a little, and overhears something that confirms one of the guys is absolutely up for more.

Move it away from the pool before you go beyond teasing and into real heat. Get it away from that cliche'.

I'd also go for a 1on1. Have your cougar separate her prey from the herd so you can go with the Mature category, which has a far larger readership than Group Sex.

Alternately, you can go with one of the younger men as the POV. Again, tone her down so she's not so obvious. Get inside his head about how he discovers that he has a serious MILF crush on her. Let him wonder about the teases ( and perhaps touches ) and whether they actually mean anything, or whether it's just in his head.

You can either go with the inexperienced guy who needs a teacher, or a guy who knows his way around the bedroom who just hasn't had the opportunity to get with an experienced woman.

Then, have her separate him from the herd, and stay in character with the experience level you gave him earlier, and have that be the thing that is turning her on. If he's experienced, then you'll probably want to surprise him with some tricks the older woman knows that none of his previous, younger bedmates have enough experience to have figure out yet.

Go that extra mile. Stand out from the crowd a little. Give your characters some personality, and your story a little tension before the fucking starts.

 

[nakdsub]

One of the problems I always have with these...

is the experience the teen always has. It always seems they know exactly what to do and have all the experience of a 40 yr. old guy, more than some.
I'd like to see the woman teach the kid.

 

[estragon]

nakd, Agreed. Of course, a certain cocky attitude (pun intended), followed by complete embarrassment as the youth discovers that talking a good game doesn't cut it, followed by the lady showing the young man where it's at, sin't a bad recipe for a good story in the FT genre.

 

[Darkniciad]

The teaching thing is used just as often as the experienced younger man. If you're not finding them, you're not looking hard enough ( or you're running away from other problems with the story before it gets to that point *laugh* )

Now the cocky guy getting brought down a notch or three - that's more rare.