Help to write a song...

[Devlishone4fun]

Closed pm first

I know most of us like listening to music as we play on Lit. So was just thinking why we should not write a song. add one line at a time.....

I will start if off and see where it goes from here or let this thread just go bust like the rest We can all agree to when to end a song then start a new one over again. Lets see how many songs we can write...

Just started out a as rainy afternoon in Georgia holding you tightly in my arms...

 

[Devlishone4fun]

seeing the errors of my way

 

[OxfordDon]

Just started out in Georgia, on a rainy afternoon


Holding you so tight in my arms, knowing that we'd part soon

 

[Devlishone4fun]

Just started out in Georgia, on a rainy afternoon
seeing the errors of my way
Holding you so tight in my arms, knowing that we'd part soon
and this kiss is so loving coming from within my heart

 

[Devlishone4fun]

well 29 views so far and not a one word added lol

 

[dutchrain]

Just started out in Georgia, on a rainy afternoon
seeing the errors of my way
Holding you so tight in my arms, knowing that we'd part soon
and this kiss is so loving coming from within my heart

Leaving you will be hard

 

[Devlishone4fun]

How can you let go so easy,
oh baby we should dance again
and dance again oh baby

 

[MrNiceGuy22]

*sorry off topic*

this just gave me the idea-- we need a thread to discuss our favorite music. again, sorry as this is unrelated, but I thought people posting here may nonetheless be interested

 

[Devlishone4fun]

post away

 

[Devlishone4fun]

you never know what might have been....

 

[Devlishone4fun]

Just started out in Georgia, on a rainy afternoon
seeing the errors of my way
Holding you so tight in my arms, knowing that we'd part soon
and this kiss is so loving coming from within my heart
Leaving you will be hard
How can you let go so easy,
oh baby we should dance again
and dance again oh baby

 

[SirVPL]

more lyrics

Just started out in Georgia, on a rainy afternoon
seeing the errors of my way
Holding you so tight in my arms, knowing that we'd part soon
and this kiss is so loving coming from within my heart

I love and I will miss you,

 

[Devlishone4fun]

Just started out in Georgia, on a rainy afternoon
seeing the errors of my way
Holding you so tight in my arms, knowing that we'd part soon
and this kiss is so loving coming from within my heart
Leaving you will be hard
How can you let go so easy,
oh baby we should dance again
and dance again oh baby
I love and I will miss you,

 

[Devlishone4fun]

Song: Dance with me

Just started out in Georgia, on a rainy afternoon
seeing the errors of my way
Holding you so tight in my arms, knowing that we'd part soon
and this kiss is so loving coming from within my heart
Leaving you will be hard
How can you let go so easy,
oh baby we should dance again
and dance again oh baby
I love and I will miss you,
just feeling the same pain of you leaving
on this rainy afternoon in Georgia, so dance with me
one more time baby to our same familiar song,

 

[dutchrain]

Just started out in Georgia, on a rainy afternoon
seeing the errors of my way
Holding you so tight in my arms, knowing that we'd part soon
and this kiss is so loving coming from within my heart
Leaving you will be hard
How can you let go so easy,
oh baby we should dance again
and dance again oh baby
I love and I will miss you,
just feeling the same pain of you leaving
on this rainy afternoon in Georgia, so dance with me
one more time baby to our same familiar song,
so dance with one more time,

Holding you close, holding you tight,
not wanting to leave you.

 

[Devlishone4fun]

Song: Dance with me

Just started out in Georgia, on a rainy afternoon
seeing the errors of my way
Holding you so tight in my arms, knowing that we'd part soon
and this kiss is so loving coming from within my heart
Leaving you will be hard
How can you let go so easy,
oh baby we should dance again
and dance again oh baby
I love and I will miss you,
just feeling the same pain of you leaving
on this rainy afternoon in Georgia, so dance with me
one more time baby to our same familiar song,
Holding you close, holding you tight,
not wanting to leave you. I don't what
to say or do baby,not wanting to let you go,
so dance this last dance with me,
and want to remember the way I saw you last night

 

[dutchrain]

Just started out in Georgia, on a rainy afternoon
seeing the errors of my way
Holding you so tight in my arms, knowing that we'd part soon
and this kiss is so loving coming from within my heart
Leaving you will be hard
How can you let go so easy,
oh baby we should dance again
and dance again oh baby
I love and I will miss you,
just feeling the same pain of you leaving
on this rainy afternoon in Georgia, so dance with me
one more time baby to our same familiar song,
Holding you close, holding you tight,
not wanting to leave you. I don't what
to say or do baby,not wanting to let you go,
so dance this last dance with me,

Just started out in Georgia, on a rainy afternoon,
seeing the errors of my way,
Hating to go, not able to stay.

 

[Devlishone4fun]

Song: Dance with me

Just started out in Georgia, on a rainy afternoon
seeing the errors of my way
Holding you so tight in my arms, knowing that we'd part soon
and this kiss is so loving coming from within my heart
Leaving you will be hard
How can you let go so easy,
oh baby we should dance again
and dance again oh baby
I love and I will miss you,
just feeling the same pain of you leaving
on this rainy afternoon in Georgia, so dance with me
one more time baby to our same familiar song,
Holding you close, holding you tight,
not wanting to leave you. I don't what
to say or do baby,not wanting to let you go,
so dance this last dance with me,
Just started out in Georgia, on a rainy afternoon,
seeing the errors of my way,
Hating to go, not able to stay.
But will always be in my heart forever
as we are dancing this rainy afternoon in Georgia
away, standing right here in my arms right now baby, dancing this afternoon away
and away with you, baby, just a woman and a man.

 

[Devlishone4fun]

Just started out in Georgia, on a rainy afternoon
seeing the errors of my way
Holding you so tight in my arms, knowing that we'd part soon
and this kiss is so loving coming from within my heart
Leaving you will be hard
How can you let go so easy,
oh baby we should dance again
and dance again oh baby
I love and I will miss you,
just feeling the same pain of you leaving
on this rainy afternoon in Georgia, so dance with me
one more time baby to our same familiar song,
Holding you close, holding you tight,
not wanting to leave you. I don't what
to say or do baby,not wanting to let you go,
so dance this last dance with me,
Just started out in Georgia, on a rainy afternoon,
seeing the errors of my way,
Hating to go, not able to stay.
But will always be in my heart forever
as we are dancing this rainy afternoon in Georgia
away, standing right here in my arms right now baby, dancing this afternoon awayand away with you, baby, just a woman and a man
dancing the day away on a rainy afternoon in Georgia.

 

[dutchrain]

Just started out in Georgia, on a rainy afternoon
seeing the errors of my way
Holding you so tight in my arms, knowing that we'd part soon
and this kiss is so loving coming from within my heart
Leaving you will be hard
How can you let go so easy,
oh baby we should dance again
and dance again oh baby
I love and I will miss you,
just feeling the same pain of you leaving
on this rainy afternoon in Georgia, so dance with me
one more time baby to our same familiar song,
Holding you close, holding you tight,
not wanting to leave you. I don't what
to say or do baby,not wanting to let you go,
so dance this last dance with me,
Just started out in Georgia, on a rainy afternoon,
seeing the errors of my way,
Hating to go, not able to stay.
But will always be in my heart forever
as we are dancing this rainy afternoon in Georgia
away, standing right here in my arms right now baby, dancing this afternoon away
and away with you, baby, just a woman and a man.

Just a woman and a man dancing, just a woman and a man, loving.

 

[Devlishone4fun]

Song #1: Dance with me

Just started out in Georgia, on a rainy afternoon
seeing the errors of my way
Holding you so tight in my arms, knowing that we'd part soon
and this kiss is so loving coming from within my heart
Leaving you will be hard
How can you let go so easy,
oh baby we should dance again
and dance again oh baby
I love and I will miss you,
just feeling the same pain of you leaving
on this rainy afternoon in Georgia, so dance with me
one more time baby to our same familiar song,
Holding you close, holding you tight,
not wanting to leave you. I don't what
to say or do baby,not wanting to let you go,
so dance this last dance with me,
Just started out in Georgia, on a rainy afternoon,
seeing the errors of my way,
Hating to go, not able to stay.
But will always be in my heart forever
as we are dancing this rainy afternoon in Georgia
away, standing right here in my arms right now baby, dancing this afternoon away and away with you, baby, just a woman and a man
dancing the day away on a rainy afternoon in Georgia.
Just a woman and a man dancing, just a woman and a man, loving.

Should we end this one right here and start a new one????

 

[dutchrain]

Okay.
New one:

Walking down the roads, looking for a place to stay,

 

[Devlishone4fun]

Song#2

Okay.
New one:

Walking down the roads, looking for a place to stay,

Name it dutchrain....

Walking down the roads, looking for a place to stay,
these shoes have walked, feels like a million miles so far,

 

[dutchrain]

Name it dutchrain....

Walking down the roads, looking for a place to stay,
these shoes have walked, feels like a million miles so far,

many more to go on this never-ending quest,
looking for a place to stay.



(The name will spring up along the way)

 

[Devlishone4fun]

Song#2 Place to Stay

Walking down the roads, looking for a place to stay,
these shoes have walked, feels like a million miles so far,
many more to go on this never-ending quest,
looking for a place to stay. With sun beating down on my back
but I am feeling feeling feeling and feeling so lost today,
but right here where i feeling i need to be with her on my mind,
looking for a place to stay, walking down this dirty Tennessee backroad.

Got the name~ Place to stay