help needed please

[bandelero]

I submitted my first story which got a rejection labelled, "Was there an underage character in your story?"

I would really appreciate it if anyone is willing to help me with editing as I am not sure just how much to change or what can be left in.

The story is based on two girls having a first lesbian experience and is under 2000 words.

I would love to get a PM or e mail from anyone willing to help.

Thanks

 

[Angel Love]

I submitted my first story which got a rejection labelled, "Was there an underage character in your story?"

I would really appreciate it if anyone is willing to help me with editing as I am not sure just how much to change or what can be left in.

The story is based on two girls having a first lesbian experience and is under 2000 words.

I would love to get a PM or e mail from anyone willing to help.

Thanks

I would be happy to take a look at your story for you. Send it to me at angel_love_53@yahoo.com If you have found someone already good luck to the both of you . . . smiles . . . angel.

 

[bandelero]

thanks

Many thanks for the offers to help me with this, it is great that people are willing to give time and effort:



(e mail on the way Angel_Love_53)