help me write a story

Ash03

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Hello I was wondering if someone can help me write a story. The story begins when a woman wearing a baby blue dress returns from a night out. She hears her toilet clogging and when she opens her bathroom door, her toilet was overflowing with silver liquid. When she gets a paper towel, the silver liquid started to form into a liquid man with abs before his liquid face turn into a human solid face. She was scared. He walked towards her and called her his “baby”. He told her that she looked beautiful while looking at body and caressing her face. While looking at her body he touches her dress that has some of her back showing. She begins to fall in with him. They then sat on her bed and he begins to tickle her. She ask him what his name was and he asked her what her name was. She also ask why did he come to her house and he said that she is the most beautiful thing he saw. He then kiss her hand making her blush and ask her if she wanted be turned into silver liquid like him. She ask him what’s it like. He gives her a hug and kiss and she tastes it. She said that he tasted good but he was cold. So she allowed him to turn her into goo. While he transformed her they were teasing each other as well as risqué. He also dissolved his hand to rub her body. The baby dress did not dissolved but it did turn silver liquid too. He asked her what did she think. She said that she look gorgeous and that she love him so much. He said that he love her too and the two kiss before melting into silver liquid on her bed.
Here’s the reference. https://imgur.com/a/tiMqBVG
His name is Busta and her name is Sasha
 
This sounds like the kind of crazy dream that a person might have after a night with a few too many drugs and not enough solid food. Nevertheless, it can make for a good story. I suggest you sit down at your keyboard, and imagine that you are relating the experience to your therapist. Spew it all out, with no regards to writing or style or grammar, just get it out of your head and into a file. Then, go back and edit it into a decent story, and submit it here. I bet it will be awesome!
 
He’s got silver abs and armor. He also got silver hands and shoes
 
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