help me plz

[ssbbwlibrarian]

just want to write a story on grandma/ grandson incest
but i cant really come up with a really feasible means of seduction. I have created a bold, yet introverted young male character with few aspirations in life who is very attracted to his grandma so much that it leads to voyuerism. just want help on creating an atmosphere that would help her feasibly fall for him, i've read thousands of stories... i know how to write them but I am bit of a perfectionis for this piece. would like some help thanks plz. love ya

 

[Kate.E]

How about this...
She takes her teeth out one night, in her shitty decrepid bed-sit in some towerblock in Brixton.

Johnny Grandson is pering in through a crack in the bedroom door...
The drama is heightened as they both hear the prostitute next door being fooked against the wall.

The grandmother sees Johnny, but plays it cool, going for full-on seduction. Combing her hair, feeling herself up through her soup-stained nightie.

She fondles her own saggy breast, sighing. In walks Johnny, unable to control his urges. She turns to him, peeling the straps down over her bony shouldres, ''Although your grandfather just died in this bed last week, it's not the only stiff I want in there'.

She grins at him, licking her gums. 'I may not have any teeth, but I give a nasty suck,' she said.

- rampant granny sex ensues -

 

[sister76]

How about this...
She takes her teeth out one night, in her shitty decrepid bed-sit in some towerblock in Brixton.

Johnny Grandson is pering in through a crack in the bedroom door...
The drama is heightened as they both hear the prostitute next door being fooked against the wall.

The grandmother sees Johnny, but plays it cool, going for full-on seduction. Combing her hair, feeling herself up through her soup-stained nightie.

She fondles her own saggy breast, sighing. In walks Johnny, unable to control his urges. She turns to him, peeling the straps down over her bony shouldres, ''Although your grandfather just died in this bed last week, it's not the only stiff I want in there'.

She grins at him, licking her gums. 'I may not have any teeth, but I give a nasty suck,' she said.

- rampant granny sex ensues -

Very nice story idea!

 

[ssbbwlibrarian]

How about this...
She takes her teeth out one night, in her shitty decrepid bed-sit in some towerblock in Brixton.

Johnny Grandson is pering in through a crack in the bedroom door...
The drama is heightened as they both hear the prostitute next door being fooked against the wall.

The grandmother sees Johnny, but plays it cool, going for full-on seduction. Combing her hair, feeling herself up through her soup-stained nightie.

She fondles her own saggy breast, sighing. In walks Johnny, unable to control his urges. She turns to him, peeling the straps down over her bony shouldres, ''Although your grandfather just died in this bed last week, it's not the only stiff I want in there'.

She grins at him, licking her gums. 'I may not have any teeth, but I give a nasty suck,' she said.

- rampant granny sex ensues -

roffllslzzzzzaaaaakaka

hilarious, comic relief is always welcome.

 

[Stella_Omega]

Too funny, way too funny!


Anyways, librarian, just write out what youve got. You might figure ot the seduction during the process of writing, or maybe not. I have to say that long drawn out setting-the-stage kinds of scene can be horribly boring, I only know of a few writers that can do them well, and I am NOT one of them- if I write one at all, I tend to chop it up and include it as flashbacks, or simply edit out of most of it.
Go for the meat!

 

[wishfulthinking]

Shuddering still at the "nasty suckïng" ensuing...

Grandson - introverted, shy, girls his own age ignore him, frustrated, likes the thought of an older woman to take him in hand, someone who knows what they are doing...

Enter grandma

Grandma is an ex-school teacher, bossy, authoritarian, hates laziness and dirty magazines, which she finds under his mattress after stumbling in on him at a intimate moment between his dick and hand. She sets out to punish him for his dirty fornicating ways, and one things leads to another...then the nasty sucking ensues.

 

[Kate.E]

'Enter Grandma' ??

No fucking thank you!! LMFAO

 

[ssbbwlibrarian]

i appreciate the input, i'll look into though im not into the whole dom theme, i do like my women to be aggressive and dom at times but not so much.

 

[jomar]

How about this...
She takes her teeth out one night, in her shitty decrepid bed-sit in some towerblock in Brixton.

Johnny Grandson is pering in through a crack in the bedroom door...
The drama is heightened as they both hear the prostitute next door being fooked against the wall.

The grandmother sees Johnny, but plays it cool, going for full-on seduction. Combing her hair, feeling herself up through her soup-stained nightie.

She fondles her own saggy breast, sighing. In walks Johnny, unable to control his urges. She turns to him, peeling the straps down over her bony shouldres, ''Although your grandfather just died in this bed last week, it's not the only stiff I want in there'.

She grins at him, licking her gums. 'I may not have any teeth, but I give a nasty suck,' she said.

- rampant granny sex ensues -

Yes! Just like the toothless crack whores next door! Brilliant Kate.E.

 

[jomar]

'Enter Grandma' ??

No fucking thank you!! LMFAO

Grandma could be 48 and good to go on Lit.

 

[wishfulthinking]

'Enter Grandma' ??

No fucking thank you!! LMFAO

Someone's gotta do it since grandpa died in his bed last week!