Help me Obi Wan your my only hope
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niceguy2002tim
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No help for you!
hello,
and a tumble weed blows across the desert as lilguy pleas for help. I hate to see posts without any type of replies added to them. It always makes me happy when somebody replies to my posts whether it is good or bad. In this case I'd say this is bad. With my characters such as the famous and infamous Sarah Banks of A College girl to be... I've written them into other stories. Sarah has made an apearance in The Choices We Make. and Doing the Sorority so far. And she is most likely going to come out in other places so I ask, is there any need for a cross-overs story? Maybe.
I will share something, if not my characters with you lilguy. You have a good idea, but the way it's put out isn't how I'd do it. My opinion is just that and you don't have to pay attention if you don't want to. Here's my thoughts...
When I first read about your crossovers story in the forums I was excited. I had all kinds of thoughts and possibilities running through my head. Then your story was none of those... here are some things.
1) title: Planet Chyoo.
2) Main male or female character sitting at home surfing the web for porn. On the chyoo website when some unexplainable act, such as lightning hits the house. Computer sucks the reader in and they find themselves in a new world.
3) New world is all chyoo stories and characters meshed together.
4) Pat Smith is the evil King or Queen of the world, making it kind of ironic. Instead of having many different Pat Smiths.
5) Perhaps the reader is familar with the stories and is greatly attracted to certain characters and settings.
6) Pat Smith ruler knows you are in the Chyoo world and you're not suppose to be there. Wants to have to removed from the planet.
7) The main character is not wanted because they are not a fictional character like all the others. Kind of a Cool World, Roger Rabbit idea with a human amongst the cartoons. Real vs Fictional.
That's my Seven.
-Tim (niceguy2002tim)
My stories: A Lost Identity: Sex Fugitive
&
A College girl to be...
hello,
and a tumble weed blows across the desert as lilguy pleas for help. I hate to see posts without any type of replies added to them. It always makes me happy when somebody replies to my posts whether it is good or bad. In this case I'd say this is bad. With my characters such as the famous and infamous Sarah Banks of A College girl to be... I've written them into other stories. Sarah has made an apearance in The Choices We Make. and Doing the Sorority so far. And she is most likely going to come out in other places so I ask, is there any need for a cross-overs story? Maybe.
I will share something, if not my characters with you lilguy. You have a good idea, but the way it's put out isn't how I'd do it. My opinion is just that and you don't have to pay attention if you don't want to. Here's my thoughts...
When I first read about your crossovers story in the forums I was excited. I had all kinds of thoughts and possibilities running through my head. Then your story was none of those... here are some things.
1) title: Planet Chyoo.
2) Main male or female character sitting at home surfing the web for porn. On the chyoo website when some unexplainable act, such as lightning hits the house. Computer sucks the reader in and they find themselves in a new world.
3) New world is all chyoo stories and characters meshed together.
4) Pat Smith is the evil King or Queen of the world, making it kind of ironic. Instead of having many different Pat Smiths.
5) Perhaps the reader is familar with the stories and is greatly attracted to certain characters and settings.
6) Pat Smith ruler knows you are in the Chyoo world and you're not suppose to be there. Wants to have to removed from the planet.
7) The main character is not wanted because they are not a fictional character like all the others. Kind of a Cool World, Roger Rabbit idea with a human amongst the cartoons. Real vs Fictional.
That's my Seven.
-Tim (niceguy2002tim)
My stories: A Lost Identity: Sex Fugitive
&
A College girl to be...
bungakawa2000
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Nice suggestions there, Tim. 
Also, the way you describe it (with the evil Pat Smith being after YOU!!!!) makes for a great storyline that would be more than just sex!
Bunga
Also, the way you describe it (with the evil Pat Smith being after YOU!!!!) makes for a great storyline that would be more than just sex!
Bunga
