Help in improving my writing - thank you

[Hisscarlett]

I asked for advice and constructive criticism on my first couple of stories here two weeks ago. I was so pleased with the quality of advice and comments that I received and I took them into account in my writing. I hope that there is an improvement in my writing due to the efforts of those who advised me.

I have just had my tenth story posted and would appreciate it if anyone, who has the time and/or inclination, would like to give me some constructive feedback on how I can keep working on improving my writing.

The topic is one that many may not be interested in, it is a story about a Master and his pet. It is a niche topic I suppose which may narrow the interest in advising me on my writing style and approach.

I appreciate any advice.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=386091

Thank you
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