Silver_Spyder
Experienced
- Joined
- Jul 10, 2005
- Posts
- 34
Hello, I am new to writing erotic literature, and I would very much like an editor's help in editing my story. It involves straight one on one sex, first time, and group sex. To the best of my knowledge there are no spelling errors in my story, there may be some grammatical errors, however those are likely few. I would like any suugestions you have in improving the story, character development, or dialogue. If you are interested please contact me at your earliest convenience. (silver_spyder69@yahoo.com)