Help Clean Up This Mess

[walkerlong]

Hi, I'm looking for some editorial assistance and advice. In addition to copy editing and proofreading, I could use some help with plot flow and character development. Is there too much detail here and too little detail there? Do the characters do things that make sense? You know, story stuff.

The piece I'm working on is a short story of 4500 words or so called The Right Gift at the Wrong Door. It's the light-hearted story of how a gift delivery mixup results in a session of adulterous anal pegging (it's happened to us all at one time or another, am I right?). I write in google drive, but can export into any format needed.

 

[walkerlong]

This story has been posted, so I'm not looking for an editor anymore. Give it a read, tho, and let me know what you think

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-right-gift-at-the-wrong-door

 

[robertreams]

What the Hell? I edited this story or at least tried to. But this isn't the name of teh person i edited it for. In fact i still have it as a work in progress in Google Docs.

 

[_Lynn_]

What the Hell? I edited this story or at least tried to. But this isn't the name of teh person i edited it for. In fact i still have it as a work in progress in Google Docs.

Before assuming the worst, keep in mind that many authors have more than one pen name. Cross posting and sending from the opposite account happens. Ask for clarification regarding your concerns.

 

[walkerlong]

Uhh, no. This is me. Perhaps it's confusing because my gmail username and my literotica username are not the same name?

 

[LadyVer]

Uhh, no. This is me. Perhaps it's confusing because my gmail username and my literotica username are not the same name?

It gets really confusing when you're communicating and/or editing with multiple writers. One reason why I created an Excel spreadsheet to track projects.