EdwardYounggun
Virgin
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- Dec 21, 2021
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Hello all,
I, unfortunately, got a little excited after visiting this site and writing my first story that I rushed into publishing. My only experience before this was a site that was only gay stories. This clouded my judgment when posting. Writing has always been a challenge to me along with being dyslexic and ADHD it took me so long (now as an adult) to realize that I actually enjoy telling stories. At first, I want to focus on the creative writing part, then get better with grammar, and then go on to build strength before I get serious with gay erotic writing.
Long story short, I posted my first story to erotic encounters (a straight tag) and not #GayMale. So, I have some devastating ratings for my story. But, I got great support from the site to help me change my piece to the proper tags. Now I look to get improvements/feedback before starting my next writing adventure.
Normally, I wouldn't mind because that is a part of the creative writing process but, I did not receive any feedback for which I could take with me to continue writing. I would love some constructive criticism or ratings that reflect the work I put into my first piece.
I would love some help (from my proper audience) with my story...
https://literotica.com/s/evening-run-1
Thank you!
-Edward
I, unfortunately, got a little excited after visiting this site and writing my first story that I rushed into publishing. My only experience before this was a site that was only gay stories. This clouded my judgment when posting. Writing has always been a challenge to me along with being dyslexic and ADHD it took me so long (now as an adult) to realize that I actually enjoy telling stories. At first, I want to focus on the creative writing part, then get better with grammar, and then go on to build strength before I get serious with gay erotic writing.
Long story short, I posted my first story to erotic encounters (a straight tag) and not #GayMale. So, I have some devastating ratings for my story. But, I got great support from the site to help me change my piece to the proper tags. Now I look to get improvements/feedback before starting my next writing adventure.
Normally, I wouldn't mind because that is a part of the creative writing process but, I did not receive any feedback for which I could take with me to continue writing. I would love some constructive criticism or ratings that reflect the work I put into my first piece.
I would love some help (from my proper audience) with my story...
https://literotica.com/s/evening-run-1
Thank you!
-Edward
