hello

[ManusNigrumPoet]

hello all, i am truly new to this, but i have some poetry here if you would like to view some. ill start with this one.

about slaves

i sat with a chap at a bar one eve
he said he knew of my lady eve
i smiled and answered in reply
"you lie my friend you lie"
to this he nodded and shook his head
how odd i thought to myself

and then he nodded and raised his hand
with that i saw eve come close
kneel and smile

how odd i looked as my eyes shot wide
eve my love was now his bride
he pulled her close and she suckled him dry
taking im into her mouth
she sucked and sucked

i looked in disgust
but oddly enough i was to rise
between my legs i found it shining

the old chap smiled and told me enjoy her
i did

taking her hard and spanking her
she was naughty she was
she was moaning she did
and as i sprayed my venom onto her back
she swallowed his seed

i watched in amazement he did smile
she was trained...

i look back on that moment and smile still
my dear lady eve... now belonged to steve

End


oh well its dull and boring but enjoy

 

[WickedEve]

Curious name, ManusNigrum. I looked it up. Black Hand? Is that right?
I did enjoy your poem. Especially the name of the slave.

Wicked Eve

 

[JUDO]

Welcome

MN -

Welcome to the Poetry Forum. Liked your poem. And thanks for posting your first post here (Welcome to the Lit forums, too!).

Have you thought of submitting your poem, so that others (besides us) can read it? Hope you do.

If you are looking for feedback on your work, don't hesitate to ask. Someone around here will be glad to tell you how it makes them feel.

My best.
- Judo

 

[ManusNigrumPoet]

thank you

thanks i will post ont he site as well this is just a poem i wrote for here though. and i hoped you like it.
yes black hand poet is what i went for. and i will be posting many more to come and i hope that you guys can enjoy them and i would like to read more of yours as well.

 

[Shaq]

I'm not much for poetry but I do think your name is interesting Manus...why did you choose it?

 

[ManusNigrumPoet]

i chose it because of alot of things... but its the philipino side of me comming out the spanish side and then there is the poet in me.
manus or mano i have and had to do when elders family relatives would come over. or whenever i went to my friends houses and their grandparents or uncles would come over. i had to pretty much kiss their hands.

nigrum comes out because of the blackness i feel.

and the last word is self explanatory