hello - wanting review of my erotic poetry...

RocknRoll

Sir Pervy The Epicurean
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And if any of you are a menber of deviant art please do look me up!

Firstly I am looking for some detailed feedback on what I have posted here on lit, please be as harsh as you like, I would like to improve my erotic work!

My submissions on lit

And if any of you are menbers of deviant art and/or enjoy darker poetry please feel free to check out the main section of my new poemshere

If you do read my non-lit poems feel free to give me feedback either here or on devart...

thank you very much for your time from a young poet

Rock
 
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