Hello Prince and Princesses of Authors, I am new here, 1st Story on my beautiful mind

[SeanValen]

This place, really amazing, I'm like a vampire being born, and shown around the world looking through things with my new eyes. And seen some wonderful authors, was taken by this woman called Myst, I love her stories, and she has sparked the beautiful spark in my imagination to write something, so must thank her, even though she does not know me yet. And to the rest of you, I am glad to meet you, and of cource will know you more when you reply. I have written a few stories a long time ago, I usually am great at poems and short prose type writing. But will soon develop and post a story and become one of you.


Enjoy your day/night gifted Authors.



Sean/Valen

 

[SeanValen]

Oh so as I am new, the post total says I am a virgin, not so, as in my heart I knew I belonged here before I posted)))

 

[Bob Peale]

ummm...welcome aboard.

(If that's how he says hello, how does he say "I have to go to the bathroom?")

 

[SeanValen]

Bob Peale writ ummm...welcome aboard.

(If that's how he says hello, how does he say "I have to go to the bathroom?")


I went to the bathroom, hoping the woman of my dreams would be there, the shower already warming my heart, I knew she was moving in the logic of all my dreams, and I was loving every minute of approaching her bathroom.

 

[cymbidia]

~giggling~ ...and how would he describe an orgasm?

Out of doors, with a stranger, under the boardwalk, during the day
vs
In love, romantic location, stars glittering in the sky above, after a night of wining and dining.

~still giggling~ There's a place in the world for hyperbole, isn't there?
cym

 

[SeanValen]

cymbidia writ ~giggling~ ...and how would he describe an orgasm?

Out of doors, with a stranger, under the boardwalk, during the day
vs
In love, romantic location, stars glittering in the sky above, after a night of wining and dining.

~still giggling~ There's a place in the world for hyperbole, isn't there?
cym

I would not describe a orgasm, it's something thats more feeling and emotion that no words could really express in my view. Thank you for your reply.

 

[circe!]

Hey Myst, you little Imp!

You've snared another one!

(It's gotta be the ears!)

 

[cymbidia]

I would not describe a orgasm, it's something thats more feeling and emotion that no words could really express in my view. Thank you for your reply.

How do you plan to write erotica if you're not going to describe, however obliquely, an orgasm?
~genuinely curious~
cym

 

[SeanValen]

Wonderfful Cym writHow do you plan to write erotica if you're not going to describe, however obliquely, an orgasm?
~genuinely curious~
cym

Well my new friend, good question, I will describe it in stories, but just was saying a certain truth that any one could try their best to describe it, but it would never be perfect to reflect the real thing.

I guess you will be looking out for me describing orgasms, awwww smile.

See you next time Princess.

 

[Ulyssa]

I dunno--sometimes it's better than the real thing.

 

[Cockatoo]

hyperbole

This guy IS into hyperbole! More hyperbole than anyone has ever used in the history of the known universe and beyond! So gargantuan is his hyperbole that the very underlying structures of our common tongue shudder at the very prospect of even trying to describe the hyperbole that is contained therein! His hyperbole is properly quantifiable only using a specially designed form of scientific notation comprehensible only to those with advanced degrees from a few selected institutions of higher learning.

Sorry, man, sometimes we rib each other here. Welcome to it, and enjoy!

 

[SeanValen]

Thank you Cockatoo for the welcome, that's one great reply you writ.
Enjoy your day/night

 

[Ulyssa]

"You don't just jump into hyperbole, boy..."

This is the real warning Han Solo should've given George Lucas.

 

[cymbidia]

If I've told you once, I've told you a thousand times, resist hyperbole.

Here's a little humorous thing that's been around forever but it's worth a look every now and then:
http://www.basham5.org/tls/Lighter_Side/How_to_Write_Good