Hello Hangout, Accidental Author Aid Needed

[erise]

Hi!

I'm a long time reader and fan of some of your work. I say 'some' not because the rest of you sucks, but because this is a darn big place and I haven't had the pleasure to read the rest yet.

I accidentally just became an author, so I thought I'd say hello. And 'help', but we get to that soon.

Accidentally, yes. I had no intention to write erotica until I got lured into a dare. Now I'm stuck with the obligation to not only write a story for Literotica but I let my challenger choose the category. His choice fell on Incest. That doesn't exactly tickle my funny bits, or his for that matter. He knows it, the cheeky bastard, but a dare is a dare, and the payoff if I pull it off is considerable. Worthy of a story of it's own.

So I'm determined to write one that might actually be believeable and to navigate through the dense forest of cheap 'oh Daddy' turn-ons and silly clichés.

I need help. I have no clue wether I'm on a right enough track or not. From what I've seen, many of the more serious authors wouldn't touch that category with a ten foot pole and kevlar armor. But I wonder if someone could give me a hand to just judge the credibility of what I have so far. Any volunteers in here? I'll owe you. Can pay in eternal gratitude, adoration and virtual groupie-ism.

/Erise

 

[cantdog]

Before you do actually post, erise, you ought to be aware of the age standard here. No one under age eighteen ever does or thinks or even witnesses anything sexual in any accepted Lit story.

That's the site editors, and it's their clear prerogative. That said, verisimilitude is a laudable goal. There are some excellent stories in the Incest category, in my view, but they are not the run of the mill. You want a read-through for believability?

 

[Guest]

Here's a start for you: A man and woman in their fifties meet and fall in love, they go to one or the others for a nightcap and some sex, the next morning the guest sees a picture on a shelf that is identical to one they have at home. Turns out both were prphaned at an early age and the picture is of their parents.

That gives you the leeway to write whatever you want and turn it into incest on the backend.

Just a thought.

 

[erise]

Before you do actually post, erise, you ought to be aware of the age standard here. No one under age eighteen ever does or thinks or even witnesses anything sexual in any accepted Lit story.

That's the site editors, and it's their clear prerogative. That said, verisimilitude is a laudable goal. There are some excellent stories in the Incest category, in my view, but they are not the run of the mill. You want a read-through for believability?

The rules of Literotica is one of the reasons I only read here. No risk of stumbling into things I wouldn't want to see. I wouldn't mind to stories involving teenage fun too, but the line has to be drawn somewhere, and at 18 they play it safe. This story is a totally consentual encounter between two siblings in their early 20:s. They are equal in all ways, and there is no element of coercion or dominance going on. That's pretty much the only way for me to write it. Some tension attributed to the social taboo, but mostly to their mutual attraction.

Believability, yes. I'm halfway through, and I might have unknowingly stepped on obvious landmines. It would be nice to know before I invest too much of the plot on it what might be a mistake.

/Erise

 

[minsue]

Here's a start for you: A man and woman in their fifties meet and fall in love, they go to one or the others for a nightcap and some sex, the next morning the guest sees a picture on a shelf that is identical to one they have at home. Turns out both were prphaned at an early age and the picture is of their parents.

That gives you the leeway to write whatever you want and turn it into incest on the backend.

Just a thought.

Niiiiice....A good out. One that'll get ya bombed in the scoring by the incest fans, though.

 

[erise]

Here's a start for you: A man and woman in their fifties meet and fall in love, they go to one or the others for a nightcap and some sex, the next morning the guest sees a picture on a shelf that is identical to one they have at home. Turns out both were prphaned at an early age and the picture is of their parents.

That gives you the leeway to write whatever you want and turn it into incest on the backend.

Just a thought.

Hey, that's actually pretty sweet. I might try it sometime. I had a similar idea for the story I'm writing, but I couldn't make it sound like more than a way to avoid the subject of the category.

 

[Guest]

I have two stories that are uncle/niece, with a bit of light D/s tossed in for sport. They've scored very well and have a great many reads.

The only other incest story I have is daddy/daughter. Many of those types of stories on Lit are either the dominant daddy forcing the sweet virginal 18-year-old to her ultimate sexual doom OR the sly, teasing 18-year-old slut coercing her daddy to his ultimate sexual doom.

*groan*

Mine is more consentual - older daughter, great sex with older man. In fact, as I wrote it I imagined a dear older friend of mine, so it reads more like older man, younger woman, and NOT dad/daughter. I don't think the purists like it all that well, though.

 

[Guest]

Niiiiice....A good out. One that'll get ya bombed in the scoring by the incest fans, though.

So they decide to go at it again after they find out.

Let's face it, it's really about the story, not the scores. Right?

 

[sophia jane]

Just read Scarlett's new story Hot Buttered- it's an incest story and even tho, that's not my normal thing, she wrote a great story. Yui's Sex and Candy is another good incest read, if you need some ideas of how it can be pulled off.

SJ

 

[Liar]

The only other incest story I have is daddy/daughter. Many of those types of stories on Lit are either the dominant daddy forcing the sweet virginal 18-year-old to her ultimate sexual doom OR the sly, teasing 18-year-old slut coercing her daddy to his ultimate sexual doom.

With 18-year-old daughters that act like they are much younger. Most 18 y.o knows a hella lot more about sex than the Lit variety, which leads me to suspect that the same stories might be posted elsewhere, and the age stamps have been reset to fit the Lit demands.

#L

ps Welcome to the AH, erise.

 

[erise]

Just read Scarlett's new story Hot Buttered- it's an incest story and even tho, that's not my normal thing, she wrote a great story. Yui's Sex and Candy is another good incest read, if you need some ideas of how it can be pulled off.

SJ

Thanks for the suggestions. I found Yui, but the Scarlett I can see only have one story, and that's not it.

 

[sophia jane]

Thanks for the suggestions. I found Yui, but the Scarlett I can see only have one story, and that's not it.

Sorry!
OhMissScarlett. You can find it under the nude day competition.

SJ

 

[erise]

Sorry!
OhMissScarlett. You can find it under the nude day competition.

SJ

Got it! Thank you.

 

[logophile]

Welcome to the AH erise.
Incest isn't my thing either, but I wish you the best of luck in completing your story.

 

[erise]

Welcome to the AH erise.
Incest isn't my thing either, but I wish you the best of luck in completing your story.

I'd better, or a gorgeous man has promised me he won't jump my bones next weekend. I think I can sway him to break that promise, but better safe than sorry.

 

[gauchecritic]

From what I've seen, many of the more serious authors wouldn't touch that category with a ten foot pole and kevlar armor. But I wonder if someone could give me a hand to just judge the credibility of what I have so far.
/Erise

Pick any category you like and you'll find that many of the more serious authors wouldn't touch them. Quite a few of the 'more serious' authors do write about incest (not sure if I should include myself as a serious author). I have a few and you already read two other 'serious' authors.

Like they say, the taboo of incest is the turn on, not the sex. Oddly you will find that a large percentage of readers (in my experience) get off on pregnancy being a large part of the taboo.

I'm willing to take a look at your story if you like. Paste it into a PM or send it to me at @yahoo.com.

 

[Colleen Thomas]

I've only tried the cat once. Mine is a sister/sister story. I strove for realism and there are some who appreciate it. Most however, take incest as a fantasy kind of category. They want the more styleized and cliched images, scenarios and reactions.

In my opinion, you have to balance you rowrk in that cat between what you want to write and what teh reader is expecting, if you are worried about your score.

 

[erise]

I've only tried the cat once. Mine is a sister/sister story. I strove for realism and there are some who appreciate it. Most however, take incest as a fantasy kind of category. They want the more styleized and cliched images, scenarios and reactions.

In my opinion, you have to balance you rowrk in that cat between what you want to write and what teh reader is expecting, if you are worried about your score.

I'm not too worried about the score. I'm beginning to enjoy writing this story now, so I think I'll try and make a few more after it. I just don't want to first one I write to bomb. That would probably affect how readers look at the following sumbmissions.

Isn't that thing about stylized anc clichéd images pretty common in most categories? Both the gay male and lesbian stories are more oftan than not about someone straight being seduced into a new orientation, which IMHO is pretty cliché. Are there many anal stories in there where the reciever ends up not liking it and not devoting her life to taking it up the rear? Are there many Loving Wifes stories about wives that actually love their hubbys? Ok, that particular one seems to be a special can or worms, right? Not to mention the whole 15 inches of black cock worship in the Interracial category.

No, I think I'll stick to what works for me, and hope that others will not be too different minded.

 

[erise]

Gauchecritic, thanks for your offer, the story is in the mail.