PhillippaT
Mrs
- Joined
- Aug 16, 2008
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The last time I posted here about my story (Master Swordswoman - (Lesbian, Fantasy, (with a bit of incest)) I had some very useful feedback - (thank you Anna_Malia75 
) - which has ended up with me going away and rethinking and rewriting a lot of what I originally had.
Not that I had much, though, or even have that much now, either, but I still feel a need for an independent review to make sure I'm heading in the right direction...?
Although the basic story is still the same, I've been able to flesh a lot more of it out, and (hopefully) make the writing far more descriptive, which I felt was a major weakness before. (Though it's starting to feel like work!).
Again, though, as before, I guess I'm just really nervous in that I'm really not sure if I'm any good at writing the actual sex...? I do TRY, of course, but I'm really not sure that I quite manage to achieve what I want, or what the story needs.
Since my last thread, however, because of all the extra thinking and dreaming I've been doing, I've become far more confident about the actual story itself, it's just whether or not I'm any good at writing it...?
So, as last time, are there any more, people out there that would like to give my story so far a quick perusal? I've currently got 5 parts in MS Word, at around 5000 words each. (I've sketched out a rough outline of the story and it's parts, and I think I'm looking at around 35-40 in total, say about 200k words, but as I've been realising, anything beyond what I've written can still be a bit up-in-the-air). (I've been dreaming about this story a LOT, and it seems I've come up with a new idea every week or so...
(My biggest problem, though, is that I keep getting ahead of myself - if the story I'm working on (Master Swordswoman) is successful, then I've already got ideas for two more - (Grand Master Swordswoman, and Swordswoman of Trynland). I know - I'm really bad...
Thanks for any replies...
Phillippa. X
) - which has ended up with me going away and rethinking and rewriting a lot of what I originally had.Not that I had much, though, or even have that much now, either, but I still feel a need for an independent review to make sure I'm heading in the right direction...?
Although the basic story is still the same, I've been able to flesh a lot more of it out, and (hopefully) make the writing far more descriptive, which I felt was a major weakness before. (Though it's starting to feel like work!).
Again, though, as before, I guess I'm just really nervous in that I'm really not sure if I'm any good at writing the actual sex...? I do TRY, of course, but I'm really not sure that I quite manage to achieve what I want, or what the story needs.
Since my last thread, however, because of all the extra thinking and dreaming I've been doing, I've become far more confident about the actual story itself, it's just whether or not I'm any good at writing it...?
So, as last time, are there any more, people out there that would like to give my story so far a quick perusal? I've currently got 5 parts in MS Word, at around 5000 words each. (I've sketched out a rough outline of the story and it's parts, and I think I'm looking at around 35-40 in total, say about 200k words, but as I've been realising, anything beyond what I've written can still be a bit up-in-the-air). (I've been dreaming about this story a LOT, and it seems I've come up with a new idea every week or so...
(My biggest problem, though, is that I keep getting ahead of myself - if the story I'm working on (Master Swordswoman) is successful, then I've already got ideas for two more - (Grand Master Swordswoman, and Swordswoman of Trynland). I know - I'm really bad...
Thanks for any replies...
Phillippa. X
