Heh I'm finally allowed to be here

[Lord Naraku]

I threated you guys/gals awhile back with a story. I had a bunch of problems with getting an editor and finally just said screw it and posted it. So here it is don't think I'll write anymore chapters too many english teachers trying to grade my paper.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=155987

 

[pop_54]

I threated you guys/gals awhile back with a story. I had a bunch of problems with getting an editor and finally just said screw it and posted it. So here it is don't think I'll write anymore chapters too many english teachers trying to grade my paper.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=155987

Well done mate, never give up on it, I'll have a read later