has anyone read my stories?

Bacomicfan

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Hi, fellow "smut" fanciers (Oh, I'm just kidding - I know
it's really "erotica"...lol). I've been posting stories on Literotica for quite awhile now, but I've only seen one
comment about my stories (other than my stories all being
voted as merely "average"....<sob>).
I'm just curious if anyone out there's reading my stories.
I realize that some of my little tales are a bit on the fetish side, but I have written straight sex romps too. I
just hope that people haven't seen my STEPHANIE'S FIREPLACE
SURPRISE and UNDER MAGGIE'S DESK stories and think I only
write foot stories. I am a multi-faceted fella....lol.
I WOULD like to hear from foot devotees, especially ladies, who may have enjoyed STEPH and MAGGIE, tho. Even
if you think my stories are slime-coated drek....let me
know (just don't be TOO harsh! lol). Thanks for listening.
Take care all, and keep reading.
Mike
 
Your stories are slime coated drek. Lol, kidding. Seriously though, you seem like a very talented writer...you'd have a lot more fans and commentary though if you expanded your story horizans. I mean for every person there is out there with a foot fetish, there are others into b&d, WS, fam. fun/incest, group, N/C, k-9, erotic horror, and so on and so forth. ;-)
-Aveun
 
broadening my horizons

Aveum...and others.

Thanks for the comments on my stories. I realize that
writing only about tootsie fanciers is very limiting. I
have written stories of other sexual subjects...some posted
right here on LITEROTICA. I have WE'RE DOING WHAT??!! and
LOVE AMONG THE HEADSTONES here, neither of which has anything to do with footsies. I've written a good two dozen stories so far, and only 10-12 have foot themes. I've
covered straight, D/s, bondage (light), gang bang, oral
(a favorite...lol), voyeurism and even sensual massage in
my stories. It takes so long to get them posted here (or
anywhere online) that I've only got four here so far. I have two more pending, one another tootsie story (cause I
have gotten requests for them) and the other a vampire all-
out sex story. That would mean that of six stories on
this site, half would be foot fetish stories and the other
three varied in theme. It's just getting them posted that
seems to be the problem. Thanks again. Take care
Mike
 
Love Among the Headstones

I just read this story. Very interesting. Well structured, highly descriptive, and I always enjoy a creative plot twist

My one critique is that, given the nature and magnitude of the 'plot twist' (and I'll try not to give it away for those who haven't read the story), it might be fairer to the reader to at least have dropped a few clues along the way by which make the final revelation digestible. Perhaps some other element of the fantastic (whether by the setting or some occurrence he sees) or some notion that the normal rules of reality are being suspended might be warranted. Apart from her appearing where she does, when she does, the female character comes off as 'intensely normal,' when in fact something quite extraordinary is underway. You give a hint with the references to her sadness. But, at the end, one is left with the question, 'why is she sad, given that she is (apparently) able to achieve what she achieved?'.

(You might find one of my stories to be an interesting counterpoint to "Headstones." (Again, without giving away too much, call it 'similar idea, different perspective'). Found at http://www.geocities.com/ncmwriter/story4.htm )

But I thought overall the story was very well-done.
 
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