harder

[paganangel]

please read harder by paganangel. its new.

 

[paganangel]

thanks for reading. please be especially vicious in your criticism.

 

[paganangel]

wait, considering the subject matter, that last post could be considered sarcastic, or humorous. it's neither. i just don't know what i'm doing as a poet and want feedback.

 

[lilminx]

Here's a link to the poem:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=26468