Halloween Support Thread

[Rumple Foreskin]

Oh, goody!

My short, syrupy, sentimental Halloween contest story has been posted. No overt sex, and except for what I do to good taste and the English language, no violence or horror. As of midnight, it hadn't made it to the contest list, but consider yourself warned.

Till We Meet Again

Rumple Foreskin

 

[sack]

I highly recommend Rumple's story.....

Extreme example of "less is more", you're going to have to fill in many details, but the story is even more powerful for all that. Great job Rumple, even this somewhat jaded reviewer is impressed!

Sack

 

[Black Tulip]

My first story of 2005 and I just submitted it for the contest.
I think I can say I'm back on track, smutwise.

I started reading all entries and will try to leave comments on them.
Have patience. There's a load of them already.

Since we have no Halloween in my country, I used a folk tale and inserted some sex.
Hey, it is about ghosts!

And ... it's illustrated. Now, if that doesn't get me to last place.



P.S. First I will have to hunt down Rumple for stealing my Halloween AV!

 

[geronimo_appleby]

My first story of 2005 and I just submitted it for the contest.
I think I can say I'm back on track, smutwise.

I started reading all entries and will try to leave comments on them.
Have patience. There's a load of them already.

Since we have no Halloween in my country, I used a folk tale and inserted some sex.
Hey, it is about ghosts!

And ... it's illustrated. Now, if that doesn't get me to last place.



P.S. First I will have to hunt down Rumple for stealing my Halloween AV!

your current av is pretty cute as well.

 

[Guest]

Oh hell yeah. The true comments hurt the most. Mostly because they make us feel stupid. I had one comment point out that I'd used the word Lexis (the legal research site) instead of Lexus (the car). My god did I feel stupid.

well, i had a comment on my story over night. seems like i am a sick bitch...i have no argument for that. however, this anon told me that i had done the whole thing wrong.
what freaks me out is that i did research CO poisoning....the symptoms one would have, ect. how one might reverse a fan to make it blow back into a room...on and on....and anon is arguing that it cant be done ...hrm...
also, anon kinda just grazed over the story...missed some important things.
shouldnt bother me and really it doesnt but anon took a pretty long time to write an entire paragraph about how my story is flawed.
actually, on reflection, im kinda flattered.
ok
nevermind.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

well, i had a comment on my story over night. seems like i am a sick bitch...i have no argument for that. however, this anon told me that i had done the whole thing wrong.
what freaks me out is that i did research CO poisoning....the symptoms one would have, ect. how one might reverse a fan to make it blow back into a room...on and on....and anon is arguing that it cant be done ...hrm...
also, anon kinda just grazed over the story...missed some important things.
shouldnt bother me and really it doesnt but anon took a pretty long time to write an entire paragraph about how my story is flawed.
actually, on reflection, im kinda flattered.
ok
nevermind.

good ole anon!
it's similar to the anon who wrote to me about IVF etc. i shouldn't have written about a couple who wanted children and who used a live sperm donor. you know, he gets physical with the wifey etc. apparently there are all sorts of other things they could have done...etc.
erm... how would that be smutty though? i ask myself.
now about being a sick bitch... no comment

 

[Guest]

good ole anon!
it's similar to the anon who wrote to me about IVF etc. i shouldn't have written about a couple who wanted children and who used a live sperm donor. you know, he gets physical with the wifey etc. apparently there are all sorts of other things they could have done...etc.
erm... how would that be smutty though? i ask myself.
now about being a sick bitch... no comment

well one word seems to escape alot of anon's attention...and that word is:
FICTION
it dont mattah nun... still its like a mosquito bite. just when you think youre done itching.....


as far as the sick bitch, no comment... *grin*

 

[geronimo_appleby]

well one word seems to escape alot of anon's attention...and that word is:
FICTION
it dont mattah nun... still its like a mosquito bite. just when you think youre done itching.....


as far as the sick bitch, no comment... *grin*

fiction is correct. gawd, if i lived as my murky mind imagined... gulp.
i'd be doing serious time... and boxlicker would be doing twice as long in the neighbouring cell.

 

[Black Tulip]

fiction is correct. gawd, if i lived as my murky mind imagined... gulp.
i'd be doing serious time... and boxlicker would be doing twice as long in the neighbouring cell.

LOL

I don't think I would have lived to be 51.
Would've been found dead in a ditch long before that.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

LOL

I don't think I would have lived to be 51.
Would've been found dead in a ditch long before that.

i've woken up in a ditch before...

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Extreme example of "less is more", you're going to have to fill in many details, but the story is even more powerful for all that. Great job Rumple, even this somewhat jaded reviewer is impressed!

Sack

Thanks, Sack. Your "thumbs up" means a lot. I was worried it might to too skimpy and too cloying.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[English Lady]

I actually wrote last night guys, I did.

Ok so i deleted a load of crap first but now i'm going somewhere -yippee. I might just get it finished in time.

I will want several willing victim...i mean volunteers to read it for me though, and tell me what they think.


Now i know why i've not dont halloween before, it's just not my bag baby *L*

 

[Guest]

I actually wrote last night guys, I did.

Ok so i deleted a load of crap first but now i'm going somewhere -yippee. I might just get it finished in time.

I will want several willing victim...i mean volunteers to read it for me though, and tell me what they think.


Now i know why i've not dont halloween before, it's just not my bag baby *L*

im game. send away.

 

[English Lady]

*grins* you're a star vella, I just wanna play with it a bit more, then I shall

 

[Guest]

*grins* you're a star vella, I just wanna play with it a bit more, then I shall

awesome.
hey! i got more idears for another story and i think....*gasp* i may even write another!

 

[English Lady]

awesome.
hey! i got more idears for another story and i think....*gasp* i may even write another!

*hops from foot to foot*

Ooooh yay!

I did have two ideas. I think just the one is gonna get done though.

 

[Boxlicker101]

fiction is correct. gawd, if i lived as my murky mind imagined... gulp.
i'd be doing serious time... and boxlicker would be doing twice as long in the neighbouring cell.

Actually, I probably would have long ago fucked myself to death. I must say, that would be a good way to go.

 

[dreampilot79]

I actually wrote last night guys, I did.

Ok so i deleted a load of crap first but now i'm going somewhere -yippee. I might just get it finished in time.

I will want several willing victim...i mean volunteers to read it for me though, and tell me what they think.


Now i know why i've not dont halloween before, it's just not my bag baby *L*

EL.. despite my mood lately... you know I'm always game for a read or your work. Just be prepared for the consequences... I may be in the mood for violent (but constructive) slashing attacks on stories....lol

As to ANON..... if I ever get my hands on that SOB... well.. anon has already provided the suggestions for the treatment he/she should recieve.. hmmmm that might even make a good halloween story!

 

[English Lady]

EL.. despite my mood lately... you know I'm always game for a read or your work. Just be prepared for the consequences... I may be in the mood for violent (but constructive) slashing attacks on stories....lol

As to ANON..... if I ever get my hands on that SOB... well.. anon has already provided the suggestions for the treatment he/she should recieve.. hmmmm that might even make a good halloween story!

DP -I'll send my baby over, just finihing and tweaking now. Don't be too hard on me baby -ok?

 

[Selena_Kitt]

holy cow, over 70 entries now... and sounds like more on the way... and still 2 weeks left in the contest, right?

 

[Extreme Bohunk]

holy cow, over 70 entries now... and sounds like more on the way... and still 2 weeks left in the contest, right?

Yep, until the 22nd.

 

[ABSTRUSE]

Is it wrong to be suspect that certain entries have been swamped with votes and PC's ...........or am I just reading to deep into the treachery?

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Is it wrong to be suspect that certain entries have been swamped with votes and PC's ...........or am I just reading to deep into the treachery?

well how would we know??

 

[ABSTRUSE]

well how would we know??

Be vigilant my dear, attentiveness pays off in contests.

 

[Guest]

Is it wrong to be suspect that certain entries have been swamped with votes and PC's ...........or am I just reading to deep into the treachery?

i havent even looked at others ratings/pc's/votes
its something i like to call...every day life. i ignore what i can and pay passive attention when needed