~~Haiku River~~

[Ninja Nookie]

A river of love
flows between two shores
forever more

S.

 

[My Erotic Trail]

hey hun

A river of love
flows between two shores
forever more

S.

honey suckle shore
sweet aroma of moist joy
skinney dipped in love

 

[My Erotic Trail]

finger streams
from babbling brooks whispers
pulling me in

 

[My Erotic Trail]

wet world of water
greets the shore with kisses
a harmonious love

 

[wildsweetone]

rain
ripples on the river
wet stone sinks






(man these are making me think hard. it took me 2 hours thinking to get this far whilst driving a taxi this morning.)

 

[My Erotic Trail]

wet stones sink...I like that

droplets clash
with a river's surface
a musical mesh

 

[wildsweetone]

i must not have understood after all. i thought we were meant to take a word from the previous poster's poem and use it in the next one. lol

clash is such a great verb!

 

[My Erotic Trail]

i must not have understood after all. i thought we were meant to take a word from the previous poster's poem and use it in the next one. lol

clash is such a great verb!

yes it is for the most part, but we can't always so that shouldn't stop us. How do you follow a great line like... a wet stone sinks <grin

wet stones
sitting patiently awaiting
to be seen

 

[bluerains]

river rock polished
time and flow are true jewelers
that brings its beauty

 

[wildsweetone]

yes it is for the most part, but we can't always so that shouldn't stop us. How do you follow a great line like... a wet stone sinks <grin
...

well, i was wondering the same with 'musical mesh' - then i realised it is only one word that needs to be 'borrowed' - but i'm still thinking about it because the kind of Haiku i'm writing, there are certain words i can't use. *smile*

...there's a lot of thinking goes on with this form poetry lark eh?

 

[My Erotic Trail]

well, i was wondering the same with 'musical mesh' - then i realised it is only one word that needs to be 'borrowed' - but i'm still thinking about it because the kind of Haiku i'm writing, there are certain words i can't use. *smile*

...there's a lot of thinking goes on with this form poetry lark eh?

Ill say,

my favorite.

I saw the moon
in a dew drop
hanging from a crane's bill

by a monk in the 1400's

 

[wildsweetone]

i haven't read enough to have a favourite yet.

there's too many i like...

jthserra has one he's quoted on his Kireji essay that i read yesterday...

I stop to listen;
the cricket
has done the same.
Arizona Zipper (2. pg 327)

makes me want to get on my knees and beg my cicadas to stop and listen.

 

[My Erotic Trail]

i haven't read enough to have a favourite yet.

there's too many i like...

jthserra has one he's quoted on his Kireji essay that i read yesterday...



makes me want to get on my knees and beg my cicadas to stop and listen.

I stop to listen;
the cricket
has done the same.
Arizona Zipper (2. pg 327)

I like that...another great.
yep, jim's a haiku guru...

 

[bluerains]

life in blue lanterns
carnival chinese dressing
tea divides river

 

[My Erotic Trail]

life in blue lanterns
carnival Chinese dressing
tea divides river

bamboo cranes inlayed
a water vase of Dynasty Art
Chinese writings

 

[My Erotic Trail]

unwritten knowledge
across the seas of blue
writing to you

 

[bluerains]

unwritten knowledge
across the seas of blue
writing to you

codes have no language
but, carry the seeds of time
mind has no cartridge

 

[My Erotic Trail]

codes have no language
but, carry the seeds of time
mind has no cartridge

a treasure's river
just in the knowing
I touched blue

 

[bluerains]

a river of wealth
just in the knowing
I touched the blue

we are in the blue
yes , you and I are the same
burning just one flame

 

[wildsweetone]

rain
...gave birth
...to a river

 

[bluerains]

fountainhead of blue
fantoms of sunlight and rain
sentient heaven

 

[wildsweetone]

rain
...gave birth
...to a river

hmm

spring
..rain
....a new river


(nb to self: is 'new' an intellectual concept?)

 

[wildsweetone]

a heron

heron
on an uprooted tree
floating


(still thinking about this one)

 

[My Erotic Trail]

a heron

heron
on an uprooted tree
floating


(still thinking about this one)

a drift a boyant log
a blue heron rides
down river

 

[My Erotic Trail]

three rivers collide
in harmony
trinity