Haiku one line at a time

[walkawayrenee]

The Limericks thread is fun, anyone interested in Haiku?

It's fun and easy and doesn't need to rhyme. Just five syllables, then seven, then five again.

walkawayrenee
in a fantasy somewhere
having fun on Lit.


Here's my first line to start:

Curves reflecting light

 

[Deprived_in_AZ]

Curves reflecting light
Lace covering some of them

 

[ManOSafety]

Curves reflecting light
Lace covering some of them
Light, shadow, dancing

 

[Deprived_in_AZ]

Friday afternoon

 

[ManOSafety]

Friday afternoon
On the Lit boards once again

 

[Deprived_in_AZ]

Friday afternoon
On the Lit boards once again
Just can't stay away......

 

[walkawayrenee]

What if we could do

 

[jd_quiet_guy]

What if we could do

What if we could do
Whatever we wanted to

 

[walkawayrenee]

What if we could do
Whatever we wanted to
Wouldn't that be fun?

 

[jd_quiet_guy]

whispers in your ear

 

[walkawayrenee]

whispers in your ear
soft lips slowly brushing hair

 

[jd_quiet_guy]

whispers in your ear
soft lips slowly brushing hair
Feeling, tasting you...

 

[walkawayrenee]

Somewhere beautiful

 

[ManOSafety]

Somewhere beautiful
That only you and I know

 

[jd_quiet_guy]

Somewhere beautiful
That only you and I know
yay, fornication!

 

[Deprived_in_AZ]

Somewhere beautiful
That only you and I know
Please, let's go there now.....

 

[ManOSafety]

Dusk, a wind blown shore

 

[walkawayrenee]

Somewhere beautiful
That only you and I know
Our secret escape

 

[walkawayrenee]

Dusk, a wind blown shore
Water lapping on the beach

 

[Deprived_in_AZ]

Dusk, a wind blown shore
My hair is tickling your face

 

[ManOSafety]

Dusk, a wind blown shore
Water lapping on the beach
You, me, holding hands

 

[walkawayrenee]

Dusk, a wind blown shore
My hair is tickling your face
Soft lips kissing slow

 

[walkawayrenee]

Lazy Saturday

 

[Cymru6969]

Lazy Saturday
Haven't left the bed, still nude

 

[walkawayrenee]

Lazy Saturday
Haven't left the bed, still nude
The best way to be