haiku for you

she_is_my_addiction

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Okay the whole point of this is to get goofy, get serious, get original, but write some haikus!! It's an old Japanese form of poetry, following the 5, 7, 5 line formation (five syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, 5 in the third). I'll post an example here:

The frog was happy
jumping onto lily pads
and capturing flies.

Write about anything!!
....if the haikus annoy you, post other poetry, story snippets, bouts of inspiration here as well.

Happy posting!
 
okay i got some naughty haikus. i was bored. :)

She is my true love
sexy body sexy hands,
so burn baby burn.

Make love to me girl.
Fingertips stroking my clit
make me cum again.
 
Colleen Thomas said:
Anticipation
As she slowly settles down
a taste explosion

Told ya I was no poet :)

Shut up, that was good. I shoulda made this a dirty haiku thread. Lol maybe it woulda gotten more of a response. :p
 
You are really between the monring shift and evening shift, I'm prety sure you will get some responses from the night crowd :)
 
Colleen Thomas said:
You are really between the monring shift and evening shift, I'm prety sure you will get some responses from the night crowd :)

YES!! *pumps fist in the air* :cool:

I got bored during my english exam....goddamn ADD....
 
I am back

For the good of my sanity

Bush will win

But then, I eat bush for me breackie!
 
My eyes are closing,
Thoughts of my love fill my head,
Curled with her tonight.


(I wish)
:kiss:
night night sweetie.
 
Damn, if only I could write haiku ( I can't). ahh well I will return again with something...
 
Luna_Wolf72 said:
Damn, if only I could write haiku ( I can't). ahh well I will return again with something...

Oh my lord...I have the biggest crush on you...*blush* and you posted on my thread! :cool:

*Playin it cool*
 
Luna_Wolf72 said:
Damn, if only I could write haiku ( I can't). ahh well I will return again with something...

Come back here Luna
and post a lovely Haiku
please I beg of you! :)

On that note, you don't *have* to just write Haiku's people, you can write any kind of poetry, writings, etc....
 
she_is_my_addiction said:
Oh my lord...I have the biggest crush on you...*blush* and you posted on my thread! :cool:

*Playin it cool*

awww thank you!! Tis early morning but for you I will attempt something.

Memories of you
Sunlight on your skin, once more
Waiting on forever
 
Luna_Wolf72 said:
awww thank you!! Tis early morning but for you I will attempt something.

Memories of you
Sunlight on your skin, once more
Waiting on forever

*Blushes furiously* What a way to wake up...to a Luna post! :D

I love the haiku, but the last line has six syllables. Oh what the hell...who said it *had* to be a haiku anyway?? :kiss:
 
she_is_my_addiction said:
*Blushes furiously* What a way to wake up...to a Luna post! :D

I love the haiku, but the last line has six syllables. Oh what the hell...who said it *had* to be a haiku anyway?? :kiss:

You did...and I can not count in the morning...(forgot the *e* makes forever 3 syllables...ICK!!)

anywho...will have to start anew I suppose but without the haiku form....

Glances from beneath lowered eyelids
Full mouth pursed in contemplation
Concentration, confusion
That unknown zing between two who
have only just met.
A moment suspended into an eternity
An eternity condensed, resized into
A glance from beneath lowered eyelids.
 
Fingertips kiss curves
juicy like lemon-lime pop
sugar spreading fast.

Soaked like the high tide
salty waves from the ocean
ride across my tongue
 
Luna_Wolf72 said:
You did...and I can not count in the morning...(forgot the *e* makes forever 3 syllables...ICK!!)

anywho...will have to start anew I suppose but without the haiku form....

Glances from beneath lowered eyelids
Full mouth pursed in contemplation
Concentration, confusion
That unknown zing between two who
have only just met.
A moment suspended into an eternity
An eternity condensed, resized into
A glance from beneath lowered eyelids.

Oh my....I like this quite a bit. *Blush* :kiss:
 
she_is_my_addiction said:
Fingertips kiss curves
juicy like lemon-lime pop
sugar spreading fast.

Soaked like the high tide
salty waves from the ocean
ride across my tongue

*fans self*

It isn't hot in here, is it????
 
Luna_Wolf72 said:
*fans self*

It isn't hot in here, is it????

I don't know...it's feeling a little warm. Did someone turn the air off?

I have to go to Psych class in in a couple minutes...but I'll be back, I swear. ;)
 
she_is_my_addiction said:
I don't know...it's feeling a little warm. Did someone turn the air off?

I have to go to Psych class in in a couple minutes...but I'll be back, I swear. ;)

ahhh well go knowing I will be awaiting your return at some point this day...:rose:
 
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