G Guest Guest Jan 22, 2003 #3 Your story was not very good. (No offence) A lot of detailed description but why use the words ''very erotic''? To describe eros without saying so is the point, is it not? I couldn't go more than half of the page one. 4
Your story was not very good. (No offence) A lot of detailed description but why use the words ''very erotic''? To describe eros without saying so is the point, is it not? I couldn't go more than half of the page one. 4
