Remy_James
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- Mar 18, 2008
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Hello all, I am a new author to Literotica and a long-time reader. My story is currently pending but I thought I'd ask your opinion first.
Okay, if you don't know, a grudge fuck is a consentual form of brutal/rough sex and to put it best, it's like in BDSM when there's a DOM and Slave, except in a Grudge Fuck there are two DOM's struggling for superiority.
My aim for this story was to present it as your usual "guy meets girl after a few years" to work past the build up of the relationship, and then after some fair amount of letting you know the protagonist as being this well-meaning rule-abiding guy with a lot of pent up aggression and displeased with his life of being dictated by his peers, parents, teachers. Essentially he wants control in college, when he meets this old friend she's grown into a very sexually liberated person who is a nice person, but she develops this dominating side after being in an abusive relationship that sort of damages her frame of mind between pleasure and pain. Much of the surprises that happen in the story are meant to come out of the blue so that you, the reader, are just as taken aback as the main character.
Essentially, I just wanted to reduce lovemaking into something that's purely animal lust which challenges his conforming lifestyle and urges him to embrace this repressed part of himself- it's a very unique relationship that I wanted to portray as less of a star-crossed lovers and more of a Sid and Nancy type of love and hate. This specific story covers their first encounter- it sounds straightforward but I want to keep the audience guessing as far as how they sort of relate to one another.
It's a short story, and self-contained, but my base-genre isn't erotica and I wanted to know if this is a good idea or too thought-out to be sexy. Mind you, a lot of this is implied, it is a sexual story and about 6,100 words (2 pages on lit). Any and all input would be great and I'm glad to be a part of lit!
-J
Okay, if you don't know, a grudge fuck is a consentual form of brutal/rough sex and to put it best, it's like in BDSM when there's a DOM and Slave, except in a Grudge Fuck there are two DOM's struggling for superiority.
My aim for this story was to present it as your usual "guy meets girl after a few years" to work past the build up of the relationship, and then after some fair amount of letting you know the protagonist as being this well-meaning rule-abiding guy with a lot of pent up aggression and displeased with his life of being dictated by his peers, parents, teachers. Essentially he wants control in college, when he meets this old friend she's grown into a very sexually liberated person who is a nice person, but she develops this dominating side after being in an abusive relationship that sort of damages her frame of mind between pleasure and pain. Much of the surprises that happen in the story are meant to come out of the blue so that you, the reader, are just as taken aback as the main character.
Essentially, I just wanted to reduce lovemaking into something that's purely animal lust which challenges his conforming lifestyle and urges him to embrace this repressed part of himself- it's a very unique relationship that I wanted to portray as less of a star-crossed lovers and more of a Sid and Nancy type of love and hate. This specific story covers their first encounter- it sounds straightforward but I want to keep the audience guessing as far as how they sort of relate to one another.
It's a short story, and self-contained, but my base-genre isn't erotica and I wanted to know if this is a good idea or too thought-out to be sexy. Mind you, a lot of this is implied, it is a sexual story and about 6,100 words (2 pages on lit). Any and all input would be great and I'm glad to be a part of lit!
-J
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