Groom Ridden by Bridesmaids

LOVE it! Suggest increasing the heat by making the two bridesmaids the bride's older divorced-with-kids sister and younger single sister. On the honeymoon, bride and groom stay in honeymoon suite at the resort, sisters stay together in a room on the next floor down. All three get pregnant. Bride has no clue, thinking her older sister got pregnant from sex with her ex, while slutty younger sister got knocked up from a cheap one night stand, and is excited they will be pregnant and giving birth with similar due dates! Husband, meanwhile, is getting run ragged sexually servicing three different baby-mamas.
 
LOVE it! Suggest increasing the heat by making the two bridesmaids the bride's older divorced-with-kids sister and younger single sister. On the honeymoon, bride and groom stay in honeymoon suite at the resort, sisters stay together in a room on the next floor down. All three get pregnant. Bride has no clue, thinking her older sister got pregnant from sex with her ex, while slutty younger sister got knocked up from a cheap one night stand, and is excited they will be pregnant and giving birth with similar due dates! Husband, meanwhile, is getting run ragged sexually servicing three different baby-mamas.
Part 2 - Thinking about life post-honeymoon, naïve pregnant bride is horny and happy with hubby, possessive older sister wants hubby to leave bride, keep banging her and be a daddy not only to to her baby but also her two older children, while, jealous of her two older sisters, youngest sister is suddenly insecure about her hot girl body being transformed by her growing baby bump and swelling boobs. Constantly needing sex and reassurance of her attractiveness, she wants hubby to move in with her! Three needy women, one exhausted hubby...

Conflicts:

1.) It was youngest sister's idea for she and oldest to seduce hubby, but now she and oldest are at odds because it was only supposed to be a one-time revenge thing on middle sister/bride before the wedding for being such a bitch growing up. Getting pregnant was never supposed to be a part of it.
2.) Bride remains in the dark, but is getting jealous that hubby is being so attentive to her family, frequently going over to the sisters' homes all the time to 'help out' - allegedly mowing grass, fixing plumbing issues, etc.
3.) Meanwhile, bride complains to MIL about hubby spending so much time the sisters. MIL suspects what's up. She loves all three of her daughters. With three grandbabies on the way, what's to be done about it?

Working title: The Exhausted Groom :cool:
 
Part 2 - Thinking about life post-honeymoon, naïve pregnant bride is horny and happy with hubby, possessive older sister wants hubby to leave bride, keep banging her and be a daddy not only to to her baby but also her two older children, while, jealous of her two older sisters, youngest sister is suddenly insecure about her hot girl body being transformed by her growing baby bump and swelling boobs. Constantly needing sex and reassurance of her attractiveness, she wants hubby to move in with her! Three needy women, one exhausted hubby...

Conflicts:

1.) It was youngest sister's idea for she and oldest to seduce hubby, but now she and oldest are at odds because it was only supposed to be a one-time revenge thing on middle sister/bride before the wedding for being such a bitch growing up. Getting pregnant was never supposed to be a part of it.
2.) Bride remains in the dark, but is getting jealous that hubby is being so attentive to her family, frequently going over to the sisters' homes all the time to 'help out' - allegedly mowing grass, fixing plumbing issues, etc.
3.) Meanwhile, bride complains to MIL about hubby spending so much time the sisters. MIL suspects what's up. She loves all three of her daughters. With three grandbabies on the way, what's to be done about it?

Working title: The Exhausted Groom :cool:
You already seem to have all the key bullet points. Would you write it?
 
You already seem to have all the key bullet points. Would you write it?
It may have a setup and a crisis, but before I could write it, Hubby is in triple trouble, sure enough, but what happens to resolve everything?
  • Does MIL turn into a Project Manager, bringing in her daughters and revealing what went on, then scheduling hubby's time with her three girls so he's able to better handle his carnal workload?
  • Does MIL make him divorce middle sister so MIL can marry him, making him both father and step-grandfather to the three babies?
  • Does MIL buy a ranch with a main house and two guest houses, so they can all live together, Hubby staying in the main house while the three sisters rotate?
  • How do the three sisters feel about having to share Hubby, especially when legally he belongs to middle sister?
  • How do the other two sisters atone for mucking up their middle sister's new marriage?
  • Should Hubby brings in his two brothers who are deeply in debt to him, and force them to marry the other two sisters to even everything up? (OR instead of modern times, set it in an agrarian society/kingdom from long ago, that might be fun.)
So many possibilities - It's your concept, what would you like to see?
 
It may have a setup and a crisis, but before I could write it, Hubby is in triple trouble, sure enough, but what happens to resolve everything?
  • Does MIL turn into a Project Manager, bringing in her daughters and revealing what went on, then scheduling hubby's time with her three girls so he's able to better handle his carnal workload?
  • Does MIL make him divorce middle sister so MIL can marry him, making him both father and step-grandfather to the three babies?
  • Does MIL buy a ranch with a main house and two guest houses, so they can all live together, Hubby staying in the main house while the three sisters rotate?
  • How do the three sisters feel about having to share Hubby, especially when legally he belongs to middle sister?
  • How do the other two sisters atone for mucking up their middle sister's new marriage?
  • Should Hubby brings in his two brothers who are deeply in debt to him, and force them to marry the other two sisters to even everything up? (OR instead of modern times, set it in an agrarian society/kingdom from long ago, that might be fun.)
So many possibilities - It's your concept, what would you like to see?

Love bringing in the brothers and set in an agrarian society/kingdom from long ago.

I had shared a similar story idea before below, maybe combining your ideas/plot with the below setting/premise can be interesting;


In the transition period from Georgian to Victorian England, inspired by the real life Beggar's Benison. In the quickly industrialising 1800's, Three Nouveau riche (Newly Rich, as in they just became rich) happily married men and their families move into the resort town of Anstruther. Two of the men are brothers, and the other is a lifelong friend. All the men are in their late 30s or early 40s. Once their families have settled into their new houses, all three men venture to a high end pub for the first time in their lives. Clearly sticking out from the other patrons in manners & status, the three sit in a corner and order some expensive drinks. A expensive looking Handsome man in his 40s approaches the three men, and offers to be a guide for them in High Society spaces and learn the intricate social etiquette. After sharing a drink with the men, and sharing some tips, he offers the men an opportunity to join The Beggar's Benison. Unsure of what the club activities involved, but wanting to feel they belonged in high society, they all reluctantly accepted the offer.

Over the next few months the three men were slowly seduced & initiated to the club, by collective masturbation & frottage. Eventually, the three men devoted themselves to the club, by performing private sexual acts on themselves, with invited blindfolded/masked women, then with the other men in the club, and finally with each other. The men are cultured in the ways of high society lifestyle, each man having many mistresses on the side by the end of the story, and are helping other men be initiated into the club.

All three men are hairy and brutish, compared to the hairless high society men. This story can include sock and costume fetish, depending on the detail you may want to explore.

For your Reference, for the real life club:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Beggar's_Benison
 
if he is going to be ridden, don't forget the saddle, and the bridle
 
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