Great story

[loquere]

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-kind-stranger

This story is a great incest story, by VincentC. It only received a 4.49. Vincent C started on Lit in 2004 but seemed to have only written this 1 story in 2011. I know how hard it is to write and I thought the story was more deserving, of a higher vote.

Please read it and vote, I loved this story and was shocked to see how low it was rated. Read and vote.

 

[peachesmelba]

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-kind-stranger

This story is a great incest story, by VincentC. It only received a 4.49. Vincent C started on Lit in 2004 but seemed to have only written this 1 story in 2011. I know how hard it is to write and I thought the story was more deserving, of a higher vote.

Please read it and vote, I loved this story and was shocked to see how low it was rated. Read and vote.

Haven't read the story yet but the highest possible rating is 5.0 - Anything above 4.0 is a very respectable 'score' since those who dislike the topic, or nitpick grammar and spelling will automatically vote lower, pulling the score down from those who voted 5 stars. Personally I don't give everyone 5 stars but I can certainly recommend those writers I did feel earned them....

 

[peachesmelba]

Actually - since I too am one of those who nitpick grammar and spelling (and punctuation and capitalization and tense......) I really couldn't recommend it much

 

[ClockworkBanana]

4.47 is still pretty respectable and its a well written story. 17 comments is quite a lot of comments, so I wouldn't say it was ignored. There are a few reasons why its not rated higher, however.

First of all there are plenty of spelling and grammar mistakes. That's always a big turnoff for people. In fact, there's an error in the very first sentence.

Second of all, the entire story hinges on a last minute "plot twist" - but the fact that its in the incest category gives the plot twist away immediately, so the big reveal at the end falls flat.

And then if you take away the predictable plot twist, it's a standard story about two people meeting and hooking up without realizing anything is wrong. I think in the incest category a lot of the appeal is reading about two people who KNOW that what they're doing is wrong but give in to their forbidden desires anyway.

Also, it was kind of disappointing not getting a resolution to the story after the ending. Are they going to continue to hook up? Had they given into their desires AGAIN after learning they were related, that really could have taken it an extra step beyond.

 

[loquere]

4.47 is still pretty respectable and its a well written story. 17 comments is quite a lot of comments, so I wouldn't say it was ignored. There are a few reasons why its not rated higher, however.

First of all there are plenty of spelling and grammar mistakes. That's always a big turnoff for people. In fact, there's an error in the very first sentence.

Second of all, the entire story hinges on a last minute "plot twist" - but the fact that its in the incest category gives the plot twist away immediately, so the big reveal at the end falls flat.

And then if you take away the predictable plot twist, it's a standard story about two people meeting and hooking up without realizing anything is wrong. I think in the incest category a lot of the appeal is reading about two people who KNOW that what they're doing is wrong but give in to their forbidden desires anyway.

Also, it was kind of disappointing not getting a resolution to the story after the ending. Are they going to continue to hook up? Had they given into their desires AGAIN after learning they were related, that really could have taken it an extra step beyond.

LOL, it went down because of me. it used to be 4.49. That sucks.