It features terrible editing, and a distractingly mistaken understanding of the legal process. Nevertheless, I was blown away by "Fighting for Broken Trust Ch.01" by FinalStand. The author has been amazingly prolific in a very short amount of time, in several different categories, but this is the first of his stories that I have read.
Not only does it feature an interesting story, and great character development and dialogue, but it also is a very fresh take on the LW cheating (unwilling cuckold) and revenge storyline. It is actually erotic! And compassionate. And vengeful. And smart. It blazes such an original path that the omnipresent trolls seem to have been stunned into (near) silence.
I just can't recommend this story strongly enough.
Not only does it feature an interesting story, and great character development and dialogue, but it also is a very fresh take on the LW cheating (unwilling cuckold) and revenge storyline. It is actually erotic! And compassionate. And vengeful. And smart. It blazes such an original path that the omnipresent trolls seem to have been stunned into (near) silence.
I just can't recommend this story strongly enough.
