great goodbyes...

[drown]

the
once in a blue moon:

there is
the
great goodbye

that,
as if
hovering in a great
word balloon,

has as much impact
for its
unexpectedness
as
for
the ensuing silence.

voids are voids​

 

[drown]

not truly worthy

but
for the
staged-baby-seal-hunt
feel
of this one's brief tenure...

delicious​

 

[Guest]

I *do* miss Matty. *wry*

 

[HoHoBomb]

not truly worthy

but
for the
staged-baby-seal-hunt
feel
of this one's brief tenure...

delicious​

She was so young when she took the street
Born too late in the mid-day heat
Her parents said : she went to america
She wasted days and she wasted nights
Everybodys girl, nobodys child
Her mother said: she went to america
Another day and another time
Heaven is so hard to find
Sarah said : hello america
I dont care where I sleep tonight
I dont care if Im right
I like to dance, catch the wind

When sarah smiles, her eyes shining blue
I know shes smiling straight from her heart
When sarah smiles, it means heaven too
I know her heart is breaking apart
When sarah smiles

She was so young when she left her home
Back to things like a rolling stone
Rocky said: she went to america
She cried some tears, she said goodbye
Wants to go where the eagle fly
Her mother said: she went to america
She was alone in a lonely world
On l.a. drive, she met a girl
Sarah said: hello america
I like to see an ocean in the sky
Dont stop me, when I try
I like to dance, catch the wind

 

[drown]

I *do* miss Matty. *wry*

funny that way...
isn't it?

he's been back...
i think.

 

[Tati]

yet another lit good-bye to add to the good-bye thread

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=591916

 

[LadyFunkenstein]

Fun thread; i missed it the first time around.

 

[Saint Peter]

Fun thread; i missed it the first time around.

I agree with you. This one is Lit Gold.

 

[LadyFunkenstein]

If he will keep it going, I have a good suggestion to PM drown.

 

[drown]

ain't no lock
on this one,
funk...

compose and post..

great goodbyes

are great
because
they're
plain as day​

 

[Saint Peter]

Social Blogger hits the bricks.

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=592502

 

[drown]

a
great goodbye...

or has
old cat (stevens)
temporarily
got her tongue
?​

 

[Sean]

a
great goodbye...

or has
old cat (stevens)
temporarily
got her tongue
?​

Pity it's about the third time she's pulled it.

 

[drown]

Pity it's about the third time she's pulled it.

...it did seem a bit
threadbare
for drama

but, it's a slow week at the cremlitorium

 

[drown]

a great goodbye

can be

a fabulous drive

an angry approach
a not so good putt
and
one good enough to save par

that's a
four

and out.
​

 

[LadyAria]

Leave it to Drown to make the brilliant goodbye thread.

 

[drown]

a
great goodbye

can be a
weight goodbye​

 

[naughtycakes]

Thanks for this thread. I've read through the first few pages and I'm savoring the rest. I guess I shouldn't expect any less from you

 

[curious2c]

Having been her a number of years now... damn where'd the time go?... I find that the 'goodbyes' are sometimes hard to understand, sometimes well understood, and sometimes I wonder how many hours or days it will be until that poster shows back up. heh heh heh. Just like real life at times I think.

Great thread Drown. Your style becomes it.

 

[drown]

a
great goodbye
is earnest;
as earnest as can be:

an affirmation,
a valediction,
a malediction

a fury.

it's painful
and cleansing;
sometimes in a hurry.

it's often quite personal;
sometimes even vainful,
or woeful,
or awful,

but usually,

sustainable.

lilly von schtupp lamented best​

 

[drown]

a
farewell

is not a goodbye
it's a transition.

a
great goodbye

is it's own
thread killer​

 

[butters]

my goodness.

what a strange and fascinating thread.
little suicide notes - pushed or jumped?
little voices, echoes of voices, like ghosts in the machine still lingering, final thoughts still ghosting ...

 

[Honey123]

I had forgotten about this thread...

 

[butters]

it should be a sticky. it's definitely classic.

 

[virtualmachine]

Where do the mediocre goodbyes go ?