Cattypuss
Miaow
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Hi there.
I got back into writing recently after a long break (I wasn't having good sex and it seems I only feel moved to write when I AM having good sex lol).
My most recent submission, "Cat is taken in hand", is not the first story I've done that's true. However, it is the first story I've done which is the truh, the whole truth and nothing but the truh - no embellishments, no omissions, nothing.
The reason it's written like that is that I wrote it for the guy - he asked me to. What I'm interested in is whether writing 100% truthfully, with no exaggerations, no gildng of the lily, no omissions of the less sexy bits, is maybe something to pursue. Or perhaps something to move on from cos it's not sexy enough.
So far to story has a slighty lower voting score than my best (readers seem to like "Cat, Chris and Amy", which is 100% fabrication lol).
Other feedback I'd be gateful for, if anyone has the time or inclination, is -
* I feel sometimes that I end up repeating words like "cock" and "cunt" and "arousal" too much, but at the same time I find it hard to see how that can be avoided...
* All my stories are written in the first person and include a lot of what's going on in my head. I sometimes think it would be better for readers if the stories were written in the third person and were more "visual" than "psychological"... so the reader would feel more like an observer, in the room, watching the sex.
Sorry for the length of this post. Grateful for any thoughts.
(By the way, I saw all the typos the SECOND it was published, having missed them on several proof-reading sessions before submission lol - sod's law. I don't suppose it's possible to go back and correct them??)
Here's a link to my stories.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=48866&page=submissions
Thanks
Cattypuss
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I got back into writing recently after a long break (I wasn't having good sex and it seems I only feel moved to write when I AM having good sex lol).
My most recent submission, "Cat is taken in hand", is not the first story I've done that's true. However, it is the first story I've done which is the truh, the whole truth and nothing but the truh - no embellishments, no omissions, nothing.
The reason it's written like that is that I wrote it for the guy - he asked me to. What I'm interested in is whether writing 100% truthfully, with no exaggerations, no gildng of the lily, no omissions of the less sexy bits, is maybe something to pursue. Or perhaps something to move on from cos it's not sexy enough.
So far to story has a slighty lower voting score than my best (readers seem to like "Cat, Chris and Amy", which is 100% fabrication lol).
Other feedback I'd be gateful for, if anyone has the time or inclination, is -
* I feel sometimes that I end up repeating words like "cock" and "cunt" and "arousal" too much, but at the same time I find it hard to see how that can be avoided...
* All my stories are written in the first person and include a lot of what's going on in my head. I sometimes think it would be better for readers if the stories were written in the third person and were more "visual" than "psychological"... so the reader would feel more like an observer, in the room, watching the sex.
Sorry for the length of this post. Grateful for any thoughts.
(By the way, I saw all the typos the SECOND it was published, having missed them on several proof-reading sessions before submission lol - sod's law. I don't suppose it's possible to go back and correct them??)
Here's a link to my stories.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=48866&page=submissions
Thanks
Cattypuss
x
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