Graphic Free Thought

[Sins666]

People keep telling me that this sounds alot like a BDSM poem, even though in my mind it holds other meanings. So here it is ladies and gents!

I'm addicted to your pain
I'm addicted to your suffering
Hold me down and cut me open
Bind me in chains and clutch my throat
Let the knife cut true
Make the blood run deep
I’m addicted to your pain
I’m addicted to your suffering
Throw me against the wall
Shove my head and pull my hair

Gasping and thrashing
Hold me still
Lick my wounds
Purr sweet nothings in my ear
And do it all again

Tie me to the bed
With thorny vines
Beat me and bite me
Give reason to scream and reason to bleed
Show no compassion
Just
Vengeance
No justice
Remorse
Twist and pinch my skin
Make it crawl into my skull

Breathless and tired
Massage my skin
Kiss my welts
Whisper the words
Fantastic
Great
Make me safe for an hours time
Then do it all again

 

[Guest]

People keep telling me that this sounds alot like a BDSM poem, even though in my mind it holds other meanings. So here it is ladies and gents!

I'm addicted to your pain
I'm addicted to your suffering
Hold me down and cut me open
Bind me in chains and clutch my throat
Let the knife cut true
Make the blood run deep
I’m addicted to your pain
I’m addicted your suffering
Throw me against the wall
Shove my head and pull my hair

Gasping and thrashing
Hold me still
Lick my wounds
Purr sweet nothings in my ear
And do it all again

Tie me to the bed
With thorny vines
Beat me and bite me
Give reason to scream and reason to bleed
Show no compassion
Just
Vengeance
No justice
Remorse
Twist and pinch my skin
Make it crawl into my skull

Breathless and tired
Massage my skin
Kiss my welts
Whisper the words
Fantastic
Great
Make me safe for an hours time
Then do it all again

Whoa, girl! This is some wild stuff!

I like it but have a suggestion:

At the end-

Whisper the words
Fantastic <--deepen
Great <--same
Make me safe for an hours time
Then do it all again

Boo boo:
I’m addicted to your pain
I’m addicted your suffering- to your

I hope you're going to submit this. Excellent, I say

 

[Sins666]

Who am I suppose to submitt this to?

Thanks for the typo fix. Sometimes my mind gets ahead of my fingers and I miss words and never realize it.

BTW I'm a guy . Gracias again!

 

[blackpenblueink]

I've been addicted to licking my girlfriends bottom.

 

[Guest]

Who am I suppose to submitt this to?

Thanks for the typo fix. Sometimes my mind gets ahead of my fingers and I miss words and never realize it.

BTW I'm a guy . Gracias again!

Oh, my apologies for thinking you're a woman.

Why not submit your poem here at Lit? That way you'll get some votes and constructive criticism on it.

You'll just get better and better than you already are