Grace's Night at Omega Nu Feedback

[thebobber326]

This is a story about a former dominatrix getting used by a frat house. It is a side story of my "Grace Breaks Caitlin" series that takes place at the same time as chapter 4.
https://www.literotica.com/s/graces-night-at-omega-nu

https://literotica.com/s/grace-breaks-caitlin-ch-04
(Chapter 4 for anyone curious.)

 

[SomaSlave]

This ties in nicely with Chapter 4. I enjoyed the way the two interleaf. While I'm less comfortable with the idea of a fraternity engaging in human trafficking even than the frat party gang rape, I understand it's fantasy. This story is truly nonconsensual. It reminded me of something out of de Sades' "Juliette," especially the relationship between Matt and Grace. Originally, that bugged me, but I realize that, in a Sadean universe, vice is rewarded and virtue punished. If you're going to inhabit that universe in your writing, be true to it and don't soften Grace...but please don't go "120 Days of Sodom" on us.