voluptuary_manque
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Esteemed colleagues . . . 
I'm about two-thirds through the way with a story that I can't for the life of me figure out how to categorize. On the face of it, it belongs in LW where it would be subject to the froth-mouthed ravings of the trolls that inhabit the place. I know some of you find throwing meat to them and watching the ensuing feeding frenzy with amusement perfectly okay. I'd rather not. So, if there is no place else it could possibly go, I'll put it there with malice aforethought but I'd rather not.
Situation: In a modest sized city there is a company that is the dominant employer, kind of like Peoria and International Harvester. The group I'm writing about are a number of upper management and marketing women who have to travel, sometimes for extended periods. This is rough on marriages and has in the past led to nasty fights and divorce because the men get 'lonely'. So the ladies got together and formed the Borrowers' Club. If a woman is gone for a long time and hubby can't stand it any longer he calls one of the other guys in the club and that wife hustles over and 'comforts' him until he goes to sleep and then she heads home, usually to get screwed even more intensely by her own guy. The women all figure this is better than having hubby feeling bad enough that he goes out for a drink or two to kill the pain and happens upon some other chick that wifey doesn't know. She might want to steal the guy, especially if she isn't gone for weeks at a time. So the women feel that it's better than one their friends help the guy out, someone they trust and who has no designs on their man. The story is about a new member of the club and her experiences therein.
Now, that's an obvious LW plot but can it be put somewhere else? Erotic Couplings, perhaps? Is there any justification for Group Sex? Please let me know what you think and what your reasoning is.
Thanx,
VM
I'm about two-thirds through the way with a story that I can't for the life of me figure out how to categorize. On the face of it, it belongs in LW where it would be subject to the froth-mouthed ravings of the trolls that inhabit the place. I know some of you find throwing meat to them and watching the ensuing feeding frenzy with amusement perfectly okay. I'd rather not. So, if there is no place else it could possibly go, I'll put it there with malice aforethought but I'd rather not.
Situation: In a modest sized city there is a company that is the dominant employer, kind of like Peoria and International Harvester. The group I'm writing about are a number of upper management and marketing women who have to travel, sometimes for extended periods. This is rough on marriages and has in the past led to nasty fights and divorce because the men get 'lonely'. So the ladies got together and formed the Borrowers' Club. If a woman is gone for a long time and hubby can't stand it any longer he calls one of the other guys in the club and that wife hustles over and 'comforts' him until he goes to sleep and then she heads home, usually to get screwed even more intensely by her own guy. The women all figure this is better than having hubby feeling bad enough that he goes out for a drink or two to kill the pain and happens upon some other chick that wifey doesn't know. She might want to steal the guy, especially if she isn't gone for weeks at a time. So the women feel that it's better than one their friends help the guy out, someone they trust and who has no designs on their man. The story is about a new member of the club and her experiences therein.
Now, that's an obvious LW plot but can it be put somewhere else? Erotic Couplings, perhaps? Is there any justification for Group Sex? Please let me know what you think and what your reasoning is.
Thanx,
VM
