" Good To Go"

[sirhugs]

seems like a title in search of a story.

if we had two versions, one could be called " Farewell Fuck"

possibilities?

I see :

~the couple breaking up, have one last go . It would nicely mix tenderness and saddness, with hot sex. You could add drama...will they decide the sex is so good that they stay together?
~voyeuristic variation....his or her new lover is secretly watching. Do neither of the couple know? What happens after?
~group sex version takes it ione step further- the voyeur joins in
~incest version- kid going off to school. parent is really going to miss them....
~going home version- the lover is returning home from school or a business trip, the farewell sex is tinged with thoughts of what awaits at the other end.

Thoughts? Takers on any of these or other variants?

 

[sirhugs]

recycled a year later

were these just really bad ideas?

if anyone likes them , either the titles or plot elements, feel free....

 

[TheCaptain]

...incest version- kid going off to school. parent is really going to miss them....

Not sure if I quite follow you with this, Sir... are you sayin that the parent/s seduce the kid (son/daughter) cause theyre going to miss them so much?

Think more thought has to go into the plot... the teary-parent-distressed-over-departing-child cliche seems to have been done to death here on Lit, and in my opinion for the most part not done well.

But hey, just my thoughts Be happy to try and brainstorm with you to make this fresh and new, but not too sure how it could be done...

Capt

 

[sirhugs]

I do admit that these are "quick thoughts", not gems.

my impression is that there are more 'kid returning' than 'kid leaving' stories, but that variation would certainly need the most work to make interesting.