Going Home Again

BabblingBrook

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Going Home Again (OPEN TO ALL)

(OCC: OPEN TO ALL- small town soap)

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St. Lawrence, Pennsylvania, spread out at the base of the hill. Joseph Winters leaned back against the hood of his beat-up mustang, staring down at his past. It might also be his future. He had stopped his car at the top of the hill to get a good look at the town that had birthed him, raised him, loved him and eventually sent him out into the world. The wind was picking up, pulling his long, dark hair back like a rippling banner, but he didn't even notice. He was lost in his memories.

The rolling Pennsylvania hills were still covered in green and seemed to go on forever. How anyone could live on the flat prairies or in a man-made metal and glass canyon was beyond Joseph. The hills spoke to him of days spent with his brothers and father, hiking, camping and hunting. The hills spoke of nights spent in clearing around campfires, trying to scare the crap out of each other.

The town itself had grown. There was a new three story hotel in the center of town. His mother had written him about in a few months before. She said it was part of some chain. She hated the chains. Wal-Mart and the rest of their kind were slowly destroying the small town. Soon there would be nothing left to the country but strip malls and T.G.I. Fridays, interspersed with condominiums and gas stations.

There were a few new housing developments. He could see the rows of identical, tan housing units stretched out two ugly clubs at the South end of town. One had been built on the sit of a pig farm. The farmer had realized that he could spend the rest of his life scrapping by and raising pigs, or sell his land and go live in Florida. Joseph had known that farmer. He had seemed like salt of the Earth, but the modern world was causing the salt to loss its saltiness.

First Methodist Church of St. Lawrence was still standing, despite having almost burnt down a few years before. He had actually seen that on the news. He had been working out of Harrisburg for a spell and caught snatches of the news from home. The community had rallied 'round the church and helped rebuild it. Joseph was a bit uncomfortable in the church and unsure how he felt about God, but he knew how much it meant to his mother. She had been heart-broken at the tragedy.

He had always had the lean, lanky look of his mother. He was darker than her though. Her thin, pale attractiveness had manifested in her son as something darker and more hispanic. She had never really told him about his father, so he wasn't sure what that something was. It still bugged him at times, but he had never stood up to her and tried to force her to tell him. The most she said was that it had been a terrible mistake, but that God had been gratious to her and given her a blessing out of the whole mess.

The sun was just rising above the hills on the opposite side of the long valley. Because St. Lawrence was tucked into a valley, the sun always arrived a bit later than it should. Joseph had never gotten used to the flat plains of Illinois, where the sun never seemed to go down. He was more comfortable with the long shadows of his home. They added character to the scenery.

Joseph felt nostalgic for his home, but he knew it wouldn't be the same. Even though the family homestead would be there, and his mother would be there with her hope arms, and even his old dog Chip, someone would be missing. It was the someone he wished he had arrived in time to see; the someone who had asked for him as she lay dying. He sighed and forced himself to return to the car. The sooner he arrived and said his goodbyes, the sooner he could move on and try to forget.

The whole family would be there of course, stretching his mother's old gray victorian to her limits. He knew only too well that he would be religated to the basement with Cousin Eddie and Uncle Roger. It had always been the way. Aunt Flo and Uncle Seth would take over his mother's room. It was only right. They were the leaders of the extended family and always were given the best quarters. His poor mother would probably end up on a couch or in bed with the twins. How she would be able to get any sleep between her seven year old gransons he didn't know, but she never seemed to mind. And his sister. She would be there too, of course. It had been too long and not long enough.
 
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:rose: Anna MacDonald sat out in the old, white porch swing with her long legs stretched out in front of her. It was the same position she had sat since she was able to reach the floor from a sitting position. She would gently move the swing with her toes, and her arms were always straight down by her side, holding her in her perched position. Her mother had always hated when Anna sat like that. She said that she needed to relax, to take it easy. Even on a hot summers day, on a porch swing, she couldn't take it easy.

Anna was wearing a medium length black skirt tucked modestly under her thin legs. Her ivory blouse was topped by an out-off date black dress-jacket with big buttons, wide lapels and built-in shoulder pads. He had tucked her auburn hair up into an almost Victorian twist in honor of the occasion. Her make-up was subdued, but strong.

Her brother Joseph was late, as usual. He had phoned an hour before from a rest stop on the turnpike. Why the Hell didn't he have a cell phone? Why the Hell wasn't he here? She didn't want to deal with Mama all by herself. O.K., she wasn't alone, but her mother hated Alecia. She couldn't accept their relationship. She couldn't accept who and what her daughter was. She still thought it was a faze or fad that Anna would grow out of... She knew that as long as Alecia was at the funeral and around the family, her mother would suffer alone, LOUDLY. She would keep showing her misery and throwing it back in her daughter's face.

Alecia stepped on to the porch. Her short, slightly rotund frame looked good in her full-length black dress. It did pretty well to accentuate her positive feminine traits, while de-empashizing her problem areas. Her mocha skin was clean and glowing as she smiled sadly at Anna. Her black, curly hair hung down over her shoulders with a few tendrils working their way down into her subtle cleavage.

Anna stayed still as Alecia sat down beside her. She felt her partner's arms rap around her shoulders and the warmth that came from her soft body, but she stayed stiff. No matter what Alecia had done this weekend, Anna had stayed stiff. She hadn't even cried. She felt guilty about that. She wondered if Alecia would think she was a cold fish. Her mother had cried enough for both of them and Anna almost felt that her mother cried extra loudly when her daughter was watching, as if to accuse her of not being sad enough.

Finally her brother's old mustang pulled into the drive. Anna normally would have jumped up, dragging Alecia with her. Instead she sat stiffly and rocked gently.
 
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I'd like to join this but i dont know where u r going with it. what characters do u need?
 
OCC: I tend to do a lot of writing about famiy situations and dynamics. Basically there has been a death in the family. I haven't determined who died yet, but it is a female family friend or dearly loved relative. Joseph and Anna are both returning home for the funeral. It will be a sad time of family togetherness as they leave for the funeral and the lunch afterwards, but then the family will enjoy the weekend together, along with friends and such. It will be about the fights, laughs and hook-ups that occur when an extended family and their friends get together. Any cousin, uncle, brother, aunt, family friend or whoever is welcome, but we will assume all family members are over 18 to avoid any problems. I tend to write from multiple perspectives, so I will probably create five or six characters as we go.


OCC: I just submitted the beginning of my first story under the normal story section. I am not sure how long approval takes, but please let me know what you think when it appears. It is called A Bump In The Road: Chapter 01
 
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Her brother slowly got out, cursing softly for shutting his untied shoelace in the door. He noticed his sister sitting solemnly on the porch, and opened the door to get his shoe out, then rushed over to her, holding her comfortingly.
 
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